Simple Yearnings

I have struggled from the fetal curl
just to burst upon the world
To reach, to grow, to strive;
I have stretched to be alive.

Years have come and passed.
Upright I’ve stood against the lash.
The toxic fumes waylay my breath
twist my form but I know not death.

Side by side we stand and dream
a forest farmed without a scheme.
Trunks and branches, root and bole
on we soldier to keep man whole.

To clean the air, to bring you shade,
to offer God’s beauty in the glade.
A simple yearning toward the Son
to help mankind, till day is done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/3/2009 6:35:00 AM
Congrats on your amazing poetry making semifinals. Good luck. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:23:00 PM
Deborah, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 11:53:00 PM
Hi,Debbie! Congratulations on your double first round win! I am so excited to see your name among those who have made it. Your talent shines right through your lovely and truthful words. Your double win is well-deserving. Keep up the great work and may God bless you. Love, Andrew.
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Date: 9/25/2009 2:56:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/25/2009 11:25:00 AM
Congradulations Wise One, may you kick the crap out of the rest of us in the finals:) I kid I kid, you know me, I never win contests.
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Date: 9/25/2009 7:06:00 AM
Deb,...congratulations on your first round entry !!!! Awesome poem ! james
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:53:00 PM
What a beautiful poem this is, my dearest Debbie! Yes, as sisters, side by side, we go! Congrats! Love, you! Robin
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:00:00 PM
Deb~ Congratulations on your two poems making the first round on the finals! Laura :)
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:43:00 PM
Excellent with 2 winning poems!!!! Good luck in the next round!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:18:00 AM
Well done, Debbie best wishes in the next rounds with your poems.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:46:00 PM
Deborah, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:21:00 PM
I love the last four lines and how you describe your yearning as "simple"! This is a well deserved feature!
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Deborah>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on having this wonderful poem featured..
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Date: 9/21/2009 6:11:00 AM
we all have great yearnings and aspirations...but I love this... A simple yearning toward the Son to help mankind, till day is done. i love to love the Lord.. this is well penned and rhymed. Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you! Adeleke
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 12:04:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:54:00 PM
Nice to see this featured, and a chance to read again Deborah!! Congrats!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/22/2009 8:28:00 AM
quote " I know that I shall never see, a poem lovlier than a tree", says it all!. great poem, barbara cameron
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Date: 2/21/2009 10:36:00 AM
Deborah, you truly have a gift for language and imagery! I love "the fetal curl" and the way you dream of "a forest farmed without a scheme." Indeed, God's beauty is a wonder to behold! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2009 7:50:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful, Debbie. The images are beautiful and it flows so sweetly. I can see you standing proudly in the sun. Lovely work! Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 2/11/2009 4:32:00 PM
love this write. -love and peace:james
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Date: 2/11/2009 3:40:00 PM
Nie flow of words Deborah...Raul
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Date: 2/11/2009 3:36:00 PM
Deborah this poem has excellent rhyme & flow and it reads a very clear & needed message - Outstanding penmanship Hon I just loved this poem - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/11/2009 1:48:00 PM
superb write..I just love it..all of it. BG
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