Simple Yearnings

I have struggled from the fetal curl
just to burst upon the world
To reach, to grow, to strive;
I have stretched to be alive.

Years have come and passed.
Upright I’ve stood against the lash.
The toxic fumes waylay my breath
twist my form but I know not death.

Side by side we stand and dream
a forest farmed without a scheme.
Trunks and branches, root and bole
on we soldier to keep man whole.

To clean the air, to bring you shade,
to offer God’s beauty in the glade.
A simple yearning toward the Son
to help mankind, till day is done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sheart Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 6:35 AM
Congrats on your amazing poetry making semifinals. Good luck. Love Light Truth Patricia
Moreno Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 12:23 PM
Deborah, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 11:53 PM
Hi,Debbie! Congratulations on your double first round win! I am so excited to see your name among those who have made it. Your talent shines right through your lovely and truthful words. Your double win is well-deserving. Keep up the great work and may God bless you. Love, Andrew.
Sheart Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Dvorkis Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 11:25 AM
Congradulations Wise One, may you kick the crap out of the rest of us in the finals:) I kid I kid, you know me, I never win contests.
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September 25, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Deb,...congratulations on your first round entry !!!! Awesome poem ! james
Gass Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 9:53 PM
What a beautiful poem this is, my dearest Debbie! Yes, as sisters, side by side, we go! Congrats! Love, you! Robin
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September 24, 2009 at 7:00 PM
Deb~ Congratulations on your two poems making the first round on the finals! Laura :)
Richards Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 3:43 PM
Excellent with 2 winning poems!!!! Good luck in the next round!! ~ Carrie
Strand Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 9:18 AM
Well done, Debbie best wishes in the next rounds with your poems.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 7:46 PM
Deborah, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
Augustus Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 3:21 PM
I love the last four lines and how you describe your yearning as "simple"! This is a well deserved feature!
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September 22, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Deborah>>James
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September 21, 2009 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on having this wonderful poem featured..
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September 21, 2009 at 6:11 AM
we all have great yearnings and aspirations...but I love this... A simple yearning toward the Son to help mankind, till day is done. i love to love the Lord.. this is well penned and rhymed. Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you! Adeleke
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September 21, 2009 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Deborah. Love, Carol
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September 21, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Debbie.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 5:54 PM
Nice to see this featured, and a chance to read again Deborah!! Congrats!! ~ Carrie
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February 22, 2009 at 8:28 AM
quote " I know that I shall never see, a poem lovlier than a tree", says it all!. great poem, barbara cameron
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February 21, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Deborah, you truly have a gift for language and imagery! I love "the fetal curl" and the way you dream of "a forest farmed without a scheme." Indeed, God's beauty is a wonder to behold! Love, Carolyn
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February 11, 2009 at 7:50 PM
This is absolutely beautiful, Debbie. The images are beautiful and it flows so sweetly. I can see you standing proudly in the sun. Lovely work! Love and hugs, Robin
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February 11, 2009 at 4:32 PM
love this write. -love and peace:james
Moreno Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Nie flow of words Deborah...Raul
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 3:36 PM
Deborah this poem has excellent rhyme & flow and it reads a very clear & needed message - Outstanding penmanship Hon I just loved this poem - God Bless, MJ
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February 11, 2009 at 1:48 PM
superb write..I just love it..all of it. BG
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