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Simple Mutterings- Mourning

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I held my baby so perfect and very dead and kissed his cold lips. Till my last breath I will mourn, my mourning shall shatter hearts. I dressed him in blue and laid him in sweet repose, many passed with tears. I had to let my boy go, that parting haunts me ever. _______________________ December 19, 2017 Poetry/Tanka/Simple Mutterings/Mourning and Parting Copyright Protected, ID 17-9742-39-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Nathan D.

Date: 12/25/2017 11:33:00 AM

What a sharp pain you have instilled into this excellent poem

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2017 1:41:00 PM

Oops, I just wrote a note and realized I was mistaking you for Connie!! So I am rewriting the message. I was telling Connie she should use this theme in the contest of Broken Wings Winter Cemetery. (so silly of me). Anyway, this is quite poignant, Constance. You choose a beautiful picture to represent the sadness with your words.

Lu Loo

Date: 12/20/2017 11:24:00 AM

oh my sweet lady, I am heartbroken and feel your pain deeply, good luck reads like a winner to me sweet Broken Wings :) -luloo

James Swartz

Date: 12/20/2017 8:00:00 AM

Very powerful piece. You wrote this one beautifully with overwhelming sadness.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/20/2017 4:21:00 AM

Heartbreaking and very sad write. Understand the pain.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/19/2017 10:57:00 PM

so very beautiful, Broken Wings.. just stunning Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2017 6:27:00 PM

absolutely heartbreaking Constance i can't imagine the pain of losing a child:-( hugs jan xx

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/19/2017 6:13:00 PM

Sadness that can't be spoken - but you came close!

Silent One

Date: 12/19/2017 5:18:00 PM

Heartbreaking and sad... No pain like this...I posted a Sandy hook school.tribute today... you might be able to relate.. Found my old broken wings poem, I might post it soon..

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/19/2017 5:11:00 PM

This is so heartbreaking. My sister went through this so I know how this felt... Although this breaks my heart, I really love it. It's a win for me... hugs and smiles :)