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Silver Strands

The rain fell in silver strands Upon the lake its music made Accompanied by leaves and wind A winter symphony is played......... for the Silver Strands contest

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Kenny A Fledgling Poet

Date: 12/16/2011 8:56:00 PM

Dear Mom, Congratulations, Winning this Contest Great Quatrain, I entered a Contest, English Quintain Contest by Francine Roberts. Harry comes home Dec. 20. Be Prepeared for a slew of E-Mails. He Looks so much better than he did a month ago, there is Light in his Eyes again and joy in his voice. He still shakes but not like he did before. A Fledgling Poet, Kenny

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/13/2011 6:49:00 PM

A pretty scene you have woven. Congrats on your win, Barbara. Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 12/12/2011 11:39:00 AM

Lovely poem here Barbara.Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Silver Strands" contest BG. Love, Carol

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/12/2011 7:57:00 AM

Beautiful. Well enjoyed. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2011 10:19:00 PM

Barbara. I loved the imagery in yours. It's very short, but in these few lines you captured a lot of beauty. Congrats in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/11/2011 5:13:00 PM

Very beautiful imagery in this lovely winning poem Barbara. I just love the rain and the sounds of it. Congratulations!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/11/2011 3:09:00 PM

Really nice. Congratulations. Love,Joyce

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/11/2011 2:19:00 PM

I think you really captured the subject of Silver Strands very well. Congratulations on your win Barbara

David Williams

Date: 12/11/2011 2:01:00 PM

Barbara congrats on your win, I can hear it now..David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2011 11:53:00 AM

Silver Strands contest : here we com!!! Good luck ! Love from Winter Norway and Anne-Lise

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/2/2011 9:22:00 AM

Lovely description of the rain. best of luck with your entry.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/2/2011 8:53:00 AM

I like the way you liken rain to the silver strands. This sounds like a winner to me. love phyl

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2011 8:47:00 AM

The simplicity of this lovely verse is like music to one's ears...just lovely, Barbara! Wishing you a happy holiday, and thanks for all your kind comments throughout the year! ~ Carrie