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https://youtu.be/u9Dg-g7t2l4

I always loved the song:  The sound of silence which goes back to the time frame of this poem.

I was recently inspired by a beautiful collaboration by Maria Williams and Darren White where they also included a beautiful version of this song.

I have decided to include a different version of the song here (above), with this poem that is quite powerful. 

Enjoy.

 

 

 

Silence or to speak A many years ago I was trapped in a cell of silence as a child For to speak would have been my death, as was my friend. A prison for my soul to be hiding with a promise that I made. Until later, when all silence was broken with the promise spoken. My voice became a ship carrying me through turbulent seas. Tides pulled me as life changed dramatically, I still sailed on. Learning the power of speech and faith, the savior of truth. ---- The freedom to be me ---- Heidi Sands 6/21/17

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Date: 6/24/2017 2:50:00 PM
Excellent poem Heidi, Enjoyed the poem and the video, well written, :))
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Roy. I am happy to hear you enjoyed it. Have a nice day :)
Date: 6/22/2017 2:42:00 PM
I embrace you Heidi, and I understand and can relate. And I smile at you. I have used that song so often too, as metaphor. Also by Disturbed, which is by far the most powerful and emotional.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2017 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Darren. That is so kind of you to say. I appreciate it :)
Date: 6/22/2017 11:42:00 AM
Very beautiful , Heidi ~*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2017 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 6/21/2017 11:55:00 PM
Heidi, what can I say that hasn't been said already, but bravo for coming forward and sharing this very important message with us. It's never too late to find your voice and yours is brilliant. Speaks loud and clear my friend...Maria.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria. That is very kind to say :)
Date: 6/21/2017 10:48:00 PM
What a powerful poem Heidi I love the last line. The video goes great with the poem and I don't think you could have picked a better cover of that song then the one by disturbed.that one is my favorite. A great write and a great video to go with it well done Heidi well done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thank you very much Edward. I appreciate your comment. :)
Date: 6/21/2017 6:14:00 PM
May we all find such a ship...sounds of silence is one of the most poetic songs ever written
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 7:50:00 PM
Yes it certainly does!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/21/2017 6:21:00 PM
WOW! just heard the version you posted, very very strong, gut punch...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 6:15:00 PM
Yes, Frederic! And I agree about the song...a life long favorite of mine. Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 6/21/2017 5:08:00 PM
Heidi, I think you should have been a motivational speaker. Finding one's voice is no small matter. Very well written. Powerful!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 5:13:00 PM
Wow Daniel, Thank you . I appreciate that. Actually, I don't like public speaking. But... I have written a book on this poem topic, that I hope to be published, so I may have to get used to it then lol.
Date: 6/21/2017 3:38:00 PM
Well done, sail on friend Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 4:15:00 PM
Will do , Charlie! Thank you, my friend :)
Date: 6/21/2017 2:28:00 PM
- Dramatic events can make the child silent - Use your voice and your ink, Heidi - Music makes life happy :) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 2:57:00 PM
Yes, that's true Anne-Lise. Yes, I will. Thank you for you nice comment here on this :)
Date: 6/21/2017 2:00:00 PM
You sure can write! Love it, Heidi! Breathtaking
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 2:04:00 PM
Oh...thank you so much White wolf.! Your comment makes me smile :)
Date: 6/21/2017 1:45:00 PM
I agree with Lin, Heidi....beautiful sad write my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so much WW
Date: 6/21/2017 12:42:00 PM
Disturbed has the absolute best interpretation of the song, and your plight is a good fit with the agony of that rendition. Well done, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Lin. I appreciate your comment on this very much.
Date: 6/21/2017 12:06:00 PM
And may you never be silenced again as your voice so often gives hopes to others that they too can be heard. Really nice Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2017 12:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Chris. I also stopped playing piano back then, but I do have some of it back :) I hope you have a nice day.

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