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There you are, my Earth! I see you here next to our Moon In this wondrous book- zoomed-in, You shine above the rest With cars and people everywhere- Bridges, trains, skyscrapers, jets Blue oceans with majestic ships- Those wonders of our age, Right here upon your sphere exist, You great, important, busy, busy world. There you are, my Earth- and yet- Where are you, Earth? Amid this endless cloud of dust I can barely see you- just a tiny dot In this wondrous book, zoomed out, I find you on this page with straining eye So lost inside our giant Milky Way A drifting grain of sand in time A microscopic, whirling speck, One of the millions, billions, trillions Caught in cosmic winds with all the rest- Where are you, Earth? August 25, 2018 Contest: Wonderstruck Poetry Contest Sponsor: Robert James Liguori Reversible Poem: can be read downwards and upwards.

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Date: 11/29/2021 1:20:00 PM
The micro and macro gives us a fresh perspective. Congrats on your clever verse and fine placement. Well done.
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Date: 11/29/2021 9:19:00 AM
Sandra, A lovely painting about our tiny, bold earth, holding its head high in spite of size. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/4/2018 4:57:00 PM
Returning with well deserved congratulations, Sandra, for your wonderful win with your awesome and enjoyable poem.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/3/2018 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra!!! Well deserved :) How wonderful to imagine our Earth is such a descriptive way... So big to us and yet so tiny in this Milky Way. Loved it!
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:41:00 AM
Well done Sandra, congrats on a fine placement!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, John! Sandra
Date: 9/25/2018 10:16:00 PM
Well done, Sandra. Belated congrats on your well deserved win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/1/2018 2:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/9/2018 5:13:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your top finish. I really enjoyed the differing perspectives on our Earth in relation to the scope of the universe. Interestingly, your pictures are almost exactly how I envisioned the poem ... reading a science book and seeing those two images on opposite pages.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/9/2018 7:38:00 PM
Jesse, thanks for the great, inspiring contest and for my nice placement and supportive comment. There are many very good reversible poems on your winner's list, and I was pleased to be one of them! Sandra :)
Date: 9/9/2018 4:30:00 PM
Sandra, back to say congrats. I expected to see this poem on the short list. All the best. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/9/2018 7:37:00 PM
Thank you once again, John! I appreciate your uplifting comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 8/30/2018 3:04:00 AM
A wonderful reversible poem, Sandra:) I'm finding this contest tough..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2018 7:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jo! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/27/2018 4:58:00 PM
If we look at the universe as a whole we are pretty insignificant and yet if we look within ourselves we ARE significant. Very nicely written Sandra, best of luck. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, John! I am pleased that you read and enjoyed my poem. The mysteries of the universe captivate me. Sandra :)
Date: 8/25/2018 9:39:00 PM
Wow! Sandra your fabulous poem, anyway you read it, is simply spectacular! An amazing poem and such a pleasure to read. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your visit and lovely comment! I really enjoy writing reversible poems. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/25/2018 8:34:00 PM
nicely done...a fun read
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/26/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sand! Much appreciated! Sandra

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