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shroud of clouds

 hov’ring shroud of clouds
only God can prune a storm
         levitate vortex
   angels release petrichor
hanging sheets…mothballing hail

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/29/2024 8:41:00 AM

Love this :) God bless you always, love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2024 10:42:00 AM

God bless you always xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/12/2024 1:08:00 PM

Kim, wonderful description and expression of our limitations.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2024 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, Duke!

Paige Hind

Date: 5/11/2024 3:51:00 PM

I am just now seeing this was a POTD! Congrats-

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 5/11/2024 2:17:00 PM

Dear Kim, Congratulations on this tanka POTD. Sorry to be a touch late as I had some out of state company. Blessings to you for sharing this well penned poem..

Ink Empress

Date: 5/11/2024 9:40:00 AM

Angels release petrichor! Love that line, so beautifully woven tanka it is. Well delivered. Only God can prune a storm i agree, so powerful yet delicately articulated. Pleasure reading this tender truthful tanka. Congratulations on receiving potd! Well deserved

Tom Woody

Date: 5/11/2024 6:06:00 AM

Hey Kimmie sorry late to the party. This is so good with few words. Deserving

Eve Roper

Date: 5/10/2024 9:02:00 PM

lovely, congratulations on POTD

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/10/2024 7:31:00 PM

' hanging sheets. ' Such a creative way to describe the clouds. :) Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Deb M

Date: 5/10/2024 3:52:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD Kim! Debx

Silent One

Date: 5/10/2024 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD..

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/10/2024 1:18:00 PM

Great Kim. Congrats on your POTD!

Regina Elliott

Date: 5/10/2024 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations, Kim, on your remarkable POTD. Enjoy your special poetry day :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 5/10/2024 11:07:00 AM

Many congratulations dear Kim for POTD with this great, so well written Tanka. Love your poetic choice of words and the title too to express so much. Very atmospheric and powerful. Really enjoyed it :):)

Lin Lane

Date: 5/10/2024 10:42:00 AM

pruning a storm... that's a great phrase, Kim. Congratulations on your potd.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/10/2024 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative "shroud of clouds" write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/10/2024 10:01:00 AM

I'm in a 'Dictionary-Look-up line.' Once my turn comes in about 1/2 an hour, I'll be able to comment on your poem. (Smile)... Congratulations, Kim!

Bill Baker

Date: 5/10/2024 9:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine Tanka be chosen for the POTD, Kim! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/10/2024 9:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD Kim! "only God can prune a storm" This line captures the awe and respect that nature inspires, acknowledging Gods grandeur and the limits of human influence. Inspirational. Enjoy your day!

David Crandall

Date: 5/10/2024 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations Kim, "only God can prune a storm"!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2024 9:06:00 AM

Thank you, David!

Warren Doll

Date: 5/10/2024 7:52:00 AM

Kim, great poem. So deserving o POTD~ Warrenv9e

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2024 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Warren

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/10/2024 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD. I am enjoying it again. It is a powerful poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2024 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so much! Bad storm in Tallahasee this morning. Hope all are okay.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/10/2024 4:56:00 AM

Dear Kim, I am back to congratulate you on getting POTD for this marvelous poem! - Have a Blessed Day, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2024 6:16:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/10/2024 4:53:00 AM

BIG congrats on POTD, Kim. Splendid write. Enjoy your special day today.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2024 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Karen Jones

Date: 5/10/2024 3:42:00 AM

Great form and worthy of potd congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2024 4:33:00 AM

Thank you, Karen! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/10/2024 3:30:00 AM

i don't often look at potd, but i'm glad i saw this because it's a stunning tanka..i like the internal rhyme of the title, and the idea of pruning a storm..a great visual!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2024 4:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Charlotte! :)

shroud of clouds

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