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Shoreline

Red grasses shiver in the wind under a grey and lonely sky. The yellow reeds stand by the bay like arrows. Crows squat on a single bale of hay that lies, forgotten, in the field, left to decay. I see small creatures’ paw prints in the soggy clay that lines the shore. They skim the water’s edge. Who may have made these tracks? Where do they go? I cannot say - I hope to cozy burrows and not far astray. The wild geese honk their hoarse cries, and without delay they lift off, circle once; I watch them fly away and take my longing with them on their wings. I stay behind and walk the same old path as every day. January 11, 2017

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Date: 7/24/2018 9:53:00 PM
Lovely meditative poem, Agnes. A most pleasant read.
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Date: 2/23/2017 7:59:00 AM
Excellent monorhyme here, Agnes. Congratulations :)
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Date: 1/31/2017 4:03:00 AM
Congrats Agnes, for your placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/29/2017 1:46:00 PM
Great poem about nature along the shore. The last stanza brings the piece to life. Congratulations! :-)
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:21:00 AM
Lovely piece Agnes, congratulations...
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Date: 1/28/2017 7:51:00 PM
This one was one of my very favorites. I am glad it scored high. Congrats, Agnes.
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Date: 1/28/2017 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Agnes, brilliant monorhyme.
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Date: 1/28/2017 7:04:00 AM
Oh Agnes, this is so beautiful! You really have the ability to take your reader right along with you on the mind's journey. Congratulations on your well deserved second placement! 7 ; )
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/28/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thank you, Connie - your kind comments mean a lot to me.
Date: 1/27/2017 8:52:00 PM
Really well done Agnes, a little better flow and this would have been a number 1.
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Date: 1/27/2017 9:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, John - I am so glad you liked my poem.
Date: 1/27/2017 7:21:00 PM
Beautiful write Agnes..Congrats on your win
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Date: 1/27/2017 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 1/27/2017 6:16:00 PM
Agnes, back to congratulate you on your well-deserved podium placement in this difficult contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/27/2017 9:49:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 1/17/2017 12:25:00 PM
Wow!! Agnes!! This is fabulous!!! I was drawn in!! ;) best wishes for the contest and this creative piece so full of warmth...and longing... Big Hugggs. Deb
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/17/2017 7:31:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and for your kind words, Deborah.
Date: 1/15/2017 6:30:00 PM
Agnes, what an amazing Monorhyme poem with such excellent meter and enjambment, along with wonderful imagery that brings the shoreline to life! A winner for sure! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/15/2017 6:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea.
Date: 1/15/2017 4:19:00 PM
Agnes, this is a wonderful job you did with the challenge. Great rhythm. YOU GOT STYLE< LADY!!! Sure to be a winner.
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Date: 1/15/2017 11:39:00 AM
Well done, Agnes! You make it look so easy, and yet I know for a fact that it isn't!! This is not just a monorhyme, but a poetic Monorhyme, and the rhymes are perfect. Excellent use of enjambment, too. I expect this to fly high:) Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/16/2017 3:36:00 PM
:) I love it :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/15/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. And you see, I have taken your advice :)
Date: 1/14/2017 8:59:00 AM
I like the imagery of the poem and the mixed sense of a longing for something new and an appreciation for what is already there. The dynamics of the poem are beautiful as is the rhyming! ~Heather
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/15/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comment, Heather.
Date: 1/12/2017 1:43:00 PM
Amazing Monorhyme dear Agnes, wish you the best in the contest!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/15/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios.
Date: 1/12/2017 8:37:00 AM
Superbly done Agnes...A7...peace and joy...god bless...^WW^
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/12/2017 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Winged Warrior.
Date: 1/12/2017 7:56:00 AM
Such a beautifully crafted monorhyme Agnes. You create scenes for the mind that definitely inspire beautiful thoughts.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/12/2017 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Chris.
Date: 1/12/2017 5:26:00 AM
A soft, highly imaginative and picturesque monorhyme, Agnes ... lovely ...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/12/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Probir.

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