She Comes At Night

She calls at random hours
And settles by my side
Provoking while she whispers
Appealing to my pride.
I know that she adores me
We are so mad in love
We’re made just for each other
A match of hand and glove.
She teases and I answer
To her demand, her plea
We are on the same wavelength 
She has her way with me.

In the end she leaves in silence
I can sleep but only when 
I recover my composure
And my thoughts I put to pen.


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Contest: A poem you have not entered in a contest #8
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Placing: 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Hi Andrea! I'm ashamed that I make you work so hard to find a poem to comment on; I need to post more often :) Thank you for stopping by, my friend. // paul
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November 6, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Great personifcation here, Paul. I am struggling to finc poems of yours to read. I came to your very first page and even way back, I have commented to nearly all your poems. I am thrilled to have found this gem unread by me yet!!
Manassian Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Oh My...this is just so....delicious! I love it, Paul....You are a true romantic!
Callus Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Wow! thank you Eileen; it's lovely to receive such comments, especially from you! ... and thank you also for today's most welcome visits :) // paul
A   Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:26 PM
LOL, Forever :) :) :)
A   Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:27 PM
LOL, now that is sweet
Callus Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:12 PM
:)
A   Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Hello Paul, thanks for the sweet reply..PD
Callus Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Reminds me of The Searchers and The Drifters..."Sweets for my Sweet" ...:)
Deschler Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:03 AM
Thank you for the nice compliment, Paul. You are one of the few who have noticed my new avatar. Photography is another hobby of mine, and I took this photo just the other day!....And it does reflect my style of poetry, being both dark and light, and mysterious!
Callus Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 1:39 AM
Hi Kelly...that's a lovely photo...how could I not notice it! And yes, I found both versions of "Poetry After Midnight". You too receive night calls!:)
Deschler Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 5:06 PM
This is a lovely poem, Paul, and it is one that I can really relate to. My muse comes at night, too, and there is no way that I can sleep when the voice of inspiration is whispering in my ear. Congratulations on your well deserved win!.... I wrote a poem on the same subject titled, "Poetry After Midnight".
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 5:12 PM
Thank you Kelly; so glad you enjoyed it. I believe that many of us poets receive these kinds of nightly visits! I will make it a point to go find and read your "Poetry After Midnight". cu // paul // ps love your latest avatar...mysterious light and dark:)
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 8:22 PM
This is another gem my friend. I had such a regular visitor but seems my lovely wife laying beside me at nights now has ran my sweet visitor away. lol A very fine write my friend!!
Callus Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Many thanks Robert! It is not easy to accommodate two 'women' simultaneously! But mutual understanding and a special arrangement can always be found :) cu my friend. // paul
Nance Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 7:59 PM
Oh what a sexy muse you have that comes calling at random hours. Glad to see your pen flowing such teasing and tempting words, Grats on your third place, well done hun:)
Callus Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 3:38 AM
Thank you Casarah! I love my muse...apart from being sexy she also has brains!! I bet yours is a fantastic one, too:) // paul
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June 26, 2014 at 5:02 PM
Nicely done,congrats on the win
Callus Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Thank you Greg; nice of you to stop by. cu // paul
Smith Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Congrats, Paul on a great win with this magnificent write.. Both haunting and inspiring.. Love it my friend.. Hugs... Arlene
Callus Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 9:29 AM
Hi Arlene! So glad you enjoyed my entry; thank you for the 'magnificent' comments....and the hugs :) // paul
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June 26, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Wow! Paul, you deserve this great win for this lovely write! Congratulations, my friend - Bravo!
Callus Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Pandita. I appreciate you stopping by to read and comment on my entry. Your visits are always most welcome. // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations Paul..:) !!! Tea for a treat..:D
Callus Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 3:28 AM
There's this lovely place in Tuscany....they serve mmmm food and tasty wine....:)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 12:06 PM
Wow!!! Like that dine!! Where? :D :P
Callus Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Thank you Olive_eloi :) Tea will be fine...but then we can always, for a change, go out to dine!:) // paul
Mehta Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win
Callus Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Thank you Dr! Enjoyed your entry, too...those were the days! // paul
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June 25, 2014 at 11:33 PM
hello Paul,, Congratulations:) I Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" LOVE ~LINDA
Callus Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 9:13 AM
Thank you, Linda :) You're doing a fantastic job! I wonder where you get the energy from! /x/ paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 4:08 PM
:) sweet..!!! sometimes just the mere voice of our "someone.." turns everything so light and special.. :) = olive_eloi with some memories of these prose.. :D
Callus Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Thank you Olive_eloi for stopping by again to comment on my writings. your visits provide sweet :) :) :)s thank you :) // paul
Bordner Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 6:15 PM
A Muse with no promise or appointment, that's special. Well expressed inspiration Paul J.A.B.
Callus Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:03 AM
Hi Justin. Any muse has to be tempered and pampered, otherwise she might go and not return again! // paul
Chircop Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Its as if you're thoughts penned are about your muse..the love of your life..or it could be about the woman in your life..This poem makes me ponder.Excellent!!
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Charm, you got it right...spot on. Thanks.
Carrillo Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 12:15 PM
WOW! This is some poem, written with a lot of true feelings. I do hope that love lasts. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla.
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Your pleasure is my pleasure...thanks for visiting and commenting.// paul
Acquah Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 1:24 AM
Very well expressed. I felt a little uncomfortable for you... be a trite more assertive the next time she drops by. She will soon tire of taking the lead.surprise her. lol
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 12:09 PM
I'll have to take your advice :) Thanks for dropping by. // paul
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March 3, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Perhaps next time she will sleep over and you can enjoy a morning coffee together. A very romantic piece.
Callus Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Richard. cu around.
Hamilton Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 6:41 PM
Paul welcome to Soup a lovely addition to the mix great pen hugs
Callus Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 5:14 AM
Thanks for the welcome and hugs Shadow. Hope to be seeing you around...paul
Pettit Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 4:55 PM
Nice example of light poetry. Good descriptiveness.
Callus Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 5:12 AM
Thank you Robert; I appreciate you comments; feel welcome to visit any time...paul
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March 2, 2014 at 11:11 AM
- A very lovely written poem, Paul. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. I appreciate your visiting and commenting. /x/ paul
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