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Shatterproof

the bottle bounced, said shatterproof. kids have to do it more than once. mom’s countenance shatterproof - probably laughed behind the scenes. more likely created creases, mad lines. when our kids don’t show up on time - when the watch ticks slowly fear growing… anger ticking, if relieved by the doorknob jiggling… shatterproof, no explosion, just quiet, sheer silence, no glance, no hello when ya know you’ve completely screwed up shatterproof at remembrance, when your kids likewise turn the key recklessly if they’ve made it home, you sigh with relief, with epitome, with resignation, knowing they’re stepping into the whole wide world …have you made them shatterproof? tears at times …when ticketed …heartbroken …pregnant We survive We are alive S H A T T E R P R O OF 6/24/2023

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Date: 6/26/2023 6:43:00 PM
Because we don't live in a protective bubble, we are fragile and tend to break. I wish we were "Shatterproof." Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/26/2023 4:45:00 PM
I’m so happy to see you have poem of the day, Kim. We could all use shadow proof hearts. Congratulations!!
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Date: 6/26/2023 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Kim, on POTD of a really thoughtful poem. Hugs.
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Date: 6/26/2023 3:36:00 PM
Kim, a great poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/26/2023 1:32:00 PM
Kim, a big congratulations on your 'Shatterproof" POTD honors!!! Enjoy your day xxoo
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Date: 6/26/2023 1:25:00 PM
Kim congratulations for receiving POTD God bless you...
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Date: 6/26/2023 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD . Enjoy :)
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Date: 6/26/2023 10:23:00 AM
Kim, great riffing on the word shatterproof, and sharing some of the deeper waters of childrearing and living in a dangerous world. Well rendered, congrats on POTD!
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Date: 6/26/2023 10:04:00 AM
When raised with prayer or just moral well-being; they may stray away from the narrow path, but greater chances they'll come back and like you Kim, are shatterproof. Congratulations on a most stunning and worthy POTD!
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Date: 6/26/2023 9:37:00 AM
Outstanding potd, Kim, beautiful metaphors of raising strong resilient children, so many parents wonder if they did enough~
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Date: 6/26/2023 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Kim. We indeed are shatterproof, we bend but don't break. Still here says it all. Have a joyfull day, Bill
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Date: 6/26/2023 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, May many become shatterproof in your testimony: )
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Date: 6/26/2023 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations to your POTD win. A wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day with your win.........
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Date: 6/26/2023 8:10:00 AM
I had not anticipated the ending. I hope we have made our children shatterproof.. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. A great to start the week.
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Date: 6/26/2023 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations to you Kim on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 6/26/2023 7:10:00 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on a well-deserved POTD, with this lovely poem. Enjoy your honor, dear, Kim
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Date: 6/26/2023 6:52:00 AM
A great write Kim. We truly are shatterproof against all the 'events' of life. Strong, not frail and timid. Congrats! :)
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Date: 6/26/2023 6:20:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Kim. Your ending lines spell the essence of your poem for me. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 6/26/2023 5:37:00 AM
Even when a volcano is boiling within we try to be shatterproof. In a way it is advisable. Those who get shattered with every little problem are not fit to live in this world as life is full of problems. Congratulations dear Kim on your POTD
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Date: 6/26/2023 5:08:00 AM
So happy to see your name for todays POTD Kim! Love this poem it is sooo real and relatable….if only all children were shatterproof but alas! Hehe…..Congratulations Kim you deserve it! Debx
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Date: 6/26/2023 4:38:00 AM
Parents do try put a shatterproof countenance on their faces, when possibly cracking up behind the facade, excellently expressed here Kim, wonderful choice of language chosen to reflect our true feelings, congratulations on a very much deserved POTD, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2023 4:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, David!
Date: 6/26/2023 2:28:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with this wonderful write. I enjoyed so much. Love it. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2023 4:51:00 AM
God bless you too, Gina! Thank you!
Date: 6/26/2023 2:22:00 AM
A lovely poem involving even children. Congrats on your POTD. You deserve it. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2023 4:50:00 AM
Aww…thanks so much, sweet Victor!
Date: 6/26/2023 1:18:00 AM
It’s good that those with kids are shatterproof, especially when they’re raising the roof. Enjoyed the read, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2023 4:50:00 AM
Love it…especially when raising the roof. Thank you, Belle!
Date: 6/26/2023 1:15:00 AM
The relief of the sound of the door opening, is such a blessing, and treachery if you get a call to say that one wasnt shatterproof. Kim I am sure your poem will touch the heart of every parent that reads it. So true to life. So meaningful. Just love it. So glad it was rightfully acknowledged as POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2023 4:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, S. V.!
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