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A child and a dog make the perfect pair:

No better friendship is found anywhere.

                                                            

 

Innocent days spent on the paths of Audubon Park. A dark silhouette trailing my steps; a body guard until a stick was thrown. Black tail flying in retrieval, proudly returning to lay it at my feet. Shadow was followed by his own silhouette when he chased squirrels up the nearest oak tree. Moss laden oaks, grown nearer the clouds since then. Their towering forms black wraiths, monoliths - painting the road in front of me. In my mind I am running with Shadow, waiting for my gifts of sticks. He's barking and chasing squirrels until I say, "Come on, boy. Let's go home." Innocent days were untouched by sorrow. I haven't walked those paths or visited that park since the day my Shadow could no longer follow me. February 16th, 2016

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Date: 2/21/2016 10:02:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Lin.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Upma.
Date: 2/21/2016 9:37:00 AM
wow, this gave me chills . I absolutely love it and your description is amazing. a FAVE on thee and thy poem!!
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:08:00 AM
I really appreciate your comments, Andrea. Thank you for liking it enough to save as a fave.
Date: 2/20/2016 6:12:00 PM
Wonderful free verse, Lin. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 2/20/2016 6:13:00 PM
I thank you very much, Elaine.
Date: 2/20/2016 5:04:00 PM
Oh, this does pull such heart strings....and having had my own beloved friend, a Golden Lab, as an excited companion on these same kind of adventures....this hits home! Lovely write, Lin. And thank you so much, I must add, for the placement in your vacation contest. I enjoyed the challenge :)
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Date: 2/20/2016 5:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carrie. I enjoyed your vacation... next time take me with you ;)
Date: 2/17/2016 6:24:00 AM
Bitter-sweet! The ending brought tears my eyes. Elaine
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Date: 2/17/2016 6:38:00 AM
Thanks, Elaine. To bring about emotion is a great compliment.
Date: 2/16/2016 6:18:00 PM
how sad, oh! i got an idea, you must be in a shade or covered from the sun, leave that side and get out in the rays, am sure your shadow will be there staring at you, lol...just kidding, shadow seems to be one lovely pet, am sure it'll be happy to know you've shared such lovely memories of it
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Sage.
Date: 2/16/2016 5:35:00 PM
Beautiful write, Peaches. I don't even want to think about not having my shadow. A7
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:09:00 AM
Thank you, Danny.
Date: 2/16/2016 12:57:00 PM
i feel the same way... my park is now filled with tall buildings...such a wonderful poetic treat, lin!..huggs
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:07:00 AM
and what a shame playgrounds are not what they used to be. Thanks so much for such great comments, Nette.
Date: 2/16/2016 10:59:00 AM
Lin, so touching and moving... how sad...very well written -luloo
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:06:00 AM
Thank you for reading, Luloo. You know I appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/16/2016 9:37:00 AM
Really well done, Lin. I could picture it all in my mind.
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Steve.

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