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September Chill

It was the first part of September As the leaves were just starting to turn The bonfire shrank to just one ember A fearful forecast she would discern Yes, the hurricane season lived on Although the seas were starting to cool Bounty of trees now plucked – pecan As children made their way back to school Indian Summer brought such sad news A woman still in her autumn years Struggled from her eyes, tears to excuse She had to face the greatest of fears The doctor offered no hope for her Would this month be her last September? *Entry for Brian’s September Contest

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Date: 9/21/2011 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's sponsored contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:44:00 PM
Her last September? This is such a sad sonnet, Carolyn. You are gifted at pulling at one's heart strings through your poetry. This is excellent! Hope u are doing well. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 9/18/2011 5:04:00 PM
congratulations on your wonderful win!!!===Lori
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Date: 9/17/2011 1:01:00 PM
Way to go Carolyn, a wonderful sonnet. a superb win, worthy of the glory. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:42:00 AM
I certainly hope not. Great sad poem. Congratulations Carolyn
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:08:00 AM
No, it wont be the last..love you LNC..love your sad poem as well...congrats BG
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Brian, Carolyn
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:36:00 AM
Good luck in the "September" poetry contest when Brian judges. CR
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Date: 9/6/2011 6:03:00 PM
Your words echo in my soul... but your strength echos in my heart... Bless you... love Michael
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:06:00 AM
Poignant and poetic. Each day brings bad news for somebody. All part of life, sad to say. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 9/4/2011 3:39:00 PM
Hope you place high in the contest my friend. Hope you are well....
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Date: 9/4/2011 3:06:00 PM
And still I believe.. You know what I mean by that.. Heartfelt write Carolyn.. Really love this my friend.. Love you Wilma
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Date: 9/4/2011 10:22:00 AM
Heartfelt write, dear Carolyn - but I'm sure she'll see a few more yet xx
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Date: 9/4/2011 2:53:00 AM
Very touching write. No matter how early or late you are, one of the main completions of life is the people you have touched
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Date: 9/3/2011 7:46:00 PM
Love your approach to this contest by way of theme and form! Love the questioning at the end. You are one talented and gifted poet Carolyn! Enjoyed so much reading your work and enjoy the holiday weekend!
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Date: 9/3/2011 12:27:00 PM
:( I am distraught by this, but your write is really well done, Carolyn. Take care! Love, Caroline.
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Date: 9/3/2011 8:15:00 AM
This will always be number one for me. To my fav's as I wipe the tears from my eyes. Your forever friend. Elaine
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Date: 9/2/2011 3:05:00 PM
Beautiful, haunting Sonnet, Seafaress.. This is all a part of life we must take in stride...each carry their cross. This goes to my favs. Much love, Annalise
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Date: 9/1/2011 10:28:00 PM
Great poem...Interesting to the very end...Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 9/1/2011 10:23:00 PM
Chilling indeed, and quite sad, as someone had stated, hopefully this is not a poem written about yourself. Still, it is an excellent write and I wish you best of luck in the contest Mrs. Carolyn.
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Date: 9/1/2011 9:54:00 PM
You mention things that I did not think of, like hurricanes. Great poem, I really think you will do excellent in Brian's contest. Good luck Lee
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Date: 9/1/2011 9:38:00 PM
aww this was very touching.. I loved it, hope all is going well for you.. cory
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Date: 9/1/2011 9:33:00 PM
How sad :-( I hope this is not you?
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/2/2011 7:39:00 AM
It is, Dan. Thanks for reading the poem. I've been so busy with doctors and health issues that I havn't been able to spend much time on the Soup. Love Carolyn

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