Seasoned

She used to think she was too thin. 
Probably because everyone referred 
to her as skinny. Her older brother 
called her bony butt, to her chagrin.
If.......if only the curves would come.
At sixteen they surreptitiously arrived.
Curves on curves that brought too
much unwanted and embarrassing 
attention from the male population
to a shy young woman who was just
discovering how to ascertain who 
she was and how she fit into the world.
While walking down the street, she 
nearly jumped out of her skin, as a car 
came up behind loudly honking at her.
Sometimes they even wildly leaned 
out the window making lewd remarks.
Her brother finally had to cease calling
her bony butt. He changed it to Miss Priss.
Now looking back on those pure formative
years through a seasoned nostalgic glow,
a smile crosses aged lips when a horn honks.

© Connie Marcum Wong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 30, 2015 at 9:18 PM
Connie, this utterly charming poem captures a universal truth; i.e, life is a series of ever-changing snapshots.
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December 11, 2015 at 6:46 PM
May the horns ever honk, and may you get carded. I enjoyed this a lot. Summoned nostalgia but with me guilty of this sometimes myself.
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December 7, 2015 at 2:48 PM
I thought I would make an impromptu call upon you when passing by...just to reassure myself that everything is well with you at the moment, Connie. Hope you are happy and things are going your way. Your friend always... :-) john
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December 12, 2015 at 12:28 AM
This year is ending wonderfully John. Many changes happened, most for the better. I feel very blessed. Thank you my friend. I hope you are doing well too? Happy Holidays to you and a blessed New Year!
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 7:34 PM
hey, connie, how have you been. HAve you entered any contests recently? I just put up a contest but I have a feeling I won't get many entries. I think I made it too hard!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 12:30 AM
I will enter this one of yours Andrea. Just been very swamped making out my Christmas cards and mailing packages to get there before Christmas. I hope your Holidays are very Happy my friend!
Callus Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Honking horns will make sure that you will never forget these memories of youth, Connie:) That's an age when we yearn to grow up fast, but reality of life does not take long to make its presence felt!! // A delightful poem .... was never keen on wolf whistles myself! ~ Warm regards // paul
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December 4, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Lovely piece, Connie, and I love the wry ending. Sassy lass, that one. Viv x
Boddie Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 7:22 PM
we all must evolve....but we must hold to our resolve....because our choices and mistakes....will comprise the Lives that we make....very nice connie....;)
Sathasivam Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 2:52 AM
Excellent. A lovely poem with beautifully penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Laurie Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Hello Connie... it seemed to take forever to reach 16; then 18; 21, and then 40 was a target unimaginable, and before we know it... where has the time gone - another enjoyable poem Connie - Lindsay
Vaso Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:14 AM
ah, this is just so sweet and beautiful! I love this style of poem, the past and present and how we develop into who we are!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 9:08 AM
It is nice to have someone appreciate beauty. I can see how it would make a young woman uncomfortable as she grows into her form. Well expressed with the fun bit at the end.
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December 1, 2015 at 3:49 AM
Well 'Miss Priss', I'm sure you're STILL getting those honks and remarks when you walk down the street but mostly now from dirty old men like me (Just kidding!) Bet you got a lot of compliments when you were a stewardess too right? This entire verse is just wonderful and the last line wraps in up PERFECTLY...Merry Christmas my friend! - Tim
Smith Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 6:57 PM
This a sweet poem Connie...You have been getting to me with your writes lately as I'm picturing my oldest daughter in the scene...she is 16.
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 3:48 PM
you know how much I like this one. It's AWESOME, Connie!! (also, yes, I lived in CA when Joe had a really nice job there from '85 to '90. Did you know I was in the big earthquake of SF? It felt like a roller coaster)
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 11:33 AM
such a vivid write Connie the imagery is so realistic - thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 2:06 AM
Connie, I was the opposite of your write.. =`) Your write this flowing wow and with humor.. =`) ~OLive Eloisa =`)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 3:35 AM
Thanks a lot Olive. I am off to bed as it is late here now...11:30 I appreciate you dropping by. Hugs, Connie
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