Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

Searching For Calm Repose

Comes autumn with grasslands and trees lush
As mauve pallet begins to recreate 
The exuberance of a new season's joy; 
While air tangy floats on lamplight, its mirth
Enkindlina comfort as time breathes a while 
To relish life's harvest ... senses enthralled;
 When lovers. elders under moon embrace
 Slow-dance of fall ... twigs dropping their lines: 
For only autumn's flair can grant relief- 
Through hope,upon cycle's tint, stem to leaf!


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Pre-Written 5/28/2018   Submitted 6/30/2018
Best Verse Poem in May 2018

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Constance La France July 6, 2018 at 1:43 PM Nette, congratulations on you top win in Laura's contest with this beautiful write, well done !

Susan Gentry July 4, 2018 at 8:48 AM Oh my! Congratulations on your $1 win. Great imagery and word command. An awesome poem! :)

Connie Marcum Wong July 4, 2018 at 12:40 AM This poem really shines Nette. Congratulations on having it win first placement! : )

Faraz Ajmal July 3, 2018 at 4:21 PM Ahh, this is such a lovely and beautiful poem, especially the imagery you have put in it, I absolutely love reading it, many congratulations on your first position in the contest, it is indeed a beauty

Beautiful Scars July 3, 2018 at 6:18 AM oh nette! so beautifully expressed! lovely imagery and flow, really enjoyed this poem, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Line Gauthier June 9, 2018 at 10:19 PM Congrats on your top win nette. Well penned.

Winged Warrior June 5, 2018 at 7:01 AM Congrats!!! my dear friend...1'st place...yee-ha!...L&L...^WW^

Subimal Sinha-Roy June 5, 2018 at 2:52 AM Congratulations, Nette on your first place win.

Susan Gentry June 4, 2018 at 11:08 PM Congratulations on your #1 win! Well done.

Eve Roper June 4, 2018 at 7:31 PM Great use of the 8 words and, Nette, with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Joseph May June 4, 2018 at 2:46 PM Congrats on your top win Nette

John Hamilton June 4, 2018 at 10:56 AM Amazing writing Nette, congrats on a shared first place!

Lyric Man June 3, 2018 at 4:13 AM Nette, Your descriptive prose lift me always into another place.. the place you giftedly compose. You offer the reader a journey to high mountains or low valleys.. but always a place of unforgettable wonder! This write, though sad, is another treat!

Harry Horsman May 29, 2018 at 8:41 AM love this nette, touches me deep, your words magical..

Chuck Melugin May 29, 2018 at 8:14 AM Nette.. You...my dear have spoke to my heart. Moistened hands pray, searching for calm repose. A fave to rave about!

Elaine George May 28, 2018 at 3:25 PM Beautiful sadness in this masterful free verse, Nette. Elaine

Leon Datu May 28, 2018 at 3:13 PM Blending deep melancholia with a yearning for inner comfort makes this astounding work intense yet benign in the end. You leave a distinct, personal stamp in all your poems!

Demetrios Trifiatis May 28, 2018 at 1:21 PM Sad but so poetically written that one sees only the beauty coming out of it dear, nette! Certainly high up on the ladder of the contest!

Heidi Sands May 28, 2018 at 12:49 PM Beautifully written Nette :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2018 at 12:30 PM - A beautiful poem, but at the same time sad Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May May 28, 2018 at 10:01 AM I love the first 2 lines of this beautiful yet sad poem..Well written Nette...

Frederic Parker May 28, 2018 at 8:29 AM there is a quiet sadness in this poem

Vijay Pandit May 28, 2018 at 5:17 AM This is excellent, nette..enjoyed reading it..much beauty and serenity in your words..a winning poem.