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sauvignon sunrise

early raindrops fade... last night's wine glasses refract sauvignon sunrise

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Karen Croft

Date: 10/13/2023 11:14:00 AM

Lovely

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 4:16:00 PM

an enchanting Haiku, Charlotte. I love the metaphor/image you created comparing the last night's wine glasses refract. I don't think I'll ever think of a sunrise the same...you created the perfect, lasting image for me. Am faving this, Sara

Gary Radice

Date: 9/9/2023 2:17:00 AM

Love it. I'm reminded of The Eagles' 'Tequilla Sunrise' in title only but there's a possible air of poignancy in so few words here ..as I read it. Could be the complete opposite! :) I want to know what happened the night before and that is kudos to the power of your words. Cheers - Gary

Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 9/10/2023 3:36:00 AM

i want to know what happened the night before too! lol i hadn't thought of the eagles but i see what you mean..i'm not keen on these very short forms, i really just use them as writing exercises/practice..thanks gary :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/26/2023 5:55:00 AM

Oh, such an eloquent and enchanting haiku with mesmeric tapestry of spellbinding imagery, your wordplay feels so pristine! "Last night's wine glasses refract" Love this so much, congratulations!! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2023 1:15:00 PM

Nice Haiku, my friend. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Charlotte. Have a pleasant week! Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/11/2023 5:14:00 AM

Very pretty, Charlotte! Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/10/2023 1:28:00 PM

Wine and sunrises, what could be better? Nicely done Charlotte! Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2023 1:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. Thank you for participating. Sara

Arlo Parker

Date: 8/6/2023 11:37:00 AM

Can feel the hazy wakeup call. Excellent clarity, CP. :o)

Paul Bell

Date: 8/6/2023 6:47:00 AM

Do you drink from the bottle, or are you more sophisticated? Just thinking of the clanging from the glasses the next day. Red wine at night. Shepherds delight. White wine in the morning. Shepherds warning. Probably why you don't see shepherds in the morning.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/5/2023 5:43:00 PM

Such a nice follow up to your last haiku. Was it intentional? Anyway, Sauvignon sunrise makes for a great five banger

Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 8/6/2023 3:06:00 AM

not really intentional, though it did occur to me it kind of goes well with the other one..i find when i write a haiku i end up with several different versions of it, and i then have to choose which one i'm going to use - there are four or five versions of this one!

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/5/2023 3:12:00 PM

Haiku tell us stories, sometimes secrets. Love the Sauvignon sunrise most. Bol~Anaya

Jan Allison

Date: 8/5/2023 2:01:00 PM

What a lovely haiku Charlotte, hope the empty wine glasses dont mean an early morning hangover ! I do love the title too:-)