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“Any patch of sunlight in a wood will show you something about the sun which you could never get from reading books on astronomy. These pure and spontaneous pleasures are ‘patches of Godlight’ in the woods of our experience.” (C. S Lewis)
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As sunlight sets the stream aglow, Reflecting patterns on a stream, And quiet ripples gently flow, Making the water shine and gleam. Reflecting patterns on a stream, With misty haze from cooling spray, Making the water shine and gleam, As muted shadows softly play. With misty haze from cooling spray, Pure thoughts of peace caress my mind As muted shadows softly play, I leave life’s problems far behind. Pure thoughts of peace caress my mind A sanctuary of harmony, I leave life’s problems far behind, As spring plays her symphony. A sanctuary of harmony, My quiet refuge of release, As spring plays her symphony, I free my mind to feel her peace. My quiet refuge of release, As quiet ripples gently flow, I free my mind to feel her peace, As sunlight sets the stream aglow.

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Date: 3/8/2024 9:07:00 AM
Sara, you have penned a beautiful poem, and I love the image and quote also, congratulations on your win in my contest, hugs, Constance
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/8/2024 5:59:00 PM
thank you, Constance, for your complimentary words and for the win in your contest. Color me delighted! enjoy your weekend, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/7/2024 11:31:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/lovely write again. Love the picture. Have a great day with your wonderful win..................
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/8/2024 5:58:00 PM
thank you, Paula, for always being my encouraging cheerleader! I appreciate your consistent and kind visits. Have a delightful weekend, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 5:15:00 AM
Enjoyed this soothing write this evening, Sara; all the best for the contest
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Date: 3/1/2024 2:43:00 PM
thank you, Unseeking, for stopping by. Your visit and comments mean a great deal to me. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 2/29/2024 5:32:00 PM
Marvelous, my friend. This flows so smoothly and with such powerful imagery. I am transported to a grassy hillside next to a rippling brook. I never want to leave this sanctuary. A favorite for me, Sara.
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Date: 2/29/2024 6:02:00 PM
thank you for your complimentary and enthusiastic words, Jerry. I don't want to leave this sanctuary either. Thanks, too, for the fav. I'm humbly grateful! have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 2/29/2024 4:45:00 PM
Well written, Pantoum, Sara. A very peaceful and soothing poem. A comforting read this afternoon. Thanks for sharing your gift of poetry with us. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 6:01:00 PM
thank you hubby! Glad you found my poem comforting. Thanks for being such a supportive Bard and hubby, hugs, me
Date: 2/29/2024 12:42:00 PM
Your poem elegantly captures the peaceful essence of nature, with each stanza smoothly mirroring the gentle flow of a stream, dearest Sara. The vivid imagery you employ paints a vivid picture of serenity and balance. There is no greater refuge than nature, and your poem beautifully showcases its magnificence, Best wishes for the contest.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 6:00:00 PM
dearest Sotto--I appreciate your visit and comments; I'm grateful you found my imagery vivid in the descriptions they paint of serenity/balance. I agree. No greater refuge than nature. I seek it every day in some way shape or form. Have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 2/29/2024 9:56:00 AM
Reminds me of Rumi's quote: "Remember, the entrance door to the sanctuary is inside you". The sanctuary you create is the serenity of your heart. Nice poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 5:59:00 PM
I agree, my poem does. I appreciate your sharing the Rumi connection. I love his poetry. Grateful for your ongoing support and encouragement. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 2/29/2024 9:21:00 AM
God created nature as a sanctuary for man. So in the beginning your poem reflects great beauty. Best for a win
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 5:58:00 PM
thanks for your sincere words of encouragement Victor. Yes, God created nature! have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 2/29/2024 6:35:00 AM
You jump from the precipice of C.S. Lewis to write a poetic pondering of illumination and peace.
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Date: 2/29/2024 5:57:00 PM
oh wow, C.S. Lewis...thanks for that comparison. Your mindful comments mean the world to me. Thank you, hugs, Sara
Date: 2/29/2024 6:25:00 AM
What a wonderful/lovely write with a pretty picture. I love this one. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great day...............
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 5:57:00 PM
thank you, Paula. Always grateful for your consistent visits, hugs, Sara
Date: 2/29/2024 6:04:00 AM
No better sanctuary than nature--a wonderful nature poem, Sara-- emanating its glory!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 5:55:00 PM
thanks Vijay. I appreciate your enthusiasm, Sara
Date: 2/29/2024 5:27:00 AM
Dear Sara, Your poem is a serene journey through nature's tranquility; each stanza flows like the gentle stream it describes. Your imagery is so wonderful and evocative, creating a scene of peace and harmony. Your words invite us to immerse ourselves in the beauty of the natural world, finding grace and release. This is an exquisite ode to the serenity found in the embrace of nature. Fills my heart with peace! - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 5:56:00 PM
thanks, Daniel, for your in depth read of my poem and for appreciate the imagery within. Your words 'exquisite ode to serenity' meant a great deal to me and touched my heart. I'm grateful my poem brought peace to your heart. Have a splendid evening, Sara

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