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When frosty wind roughens fine skin of day exhaling the bite of late autumn sky-- O woeful eyes quiver and turn away from hours' piercing ordeals that slowly die; like fragile mirrors thrown into the air my aloneness bleak as raked shadow's claw, while ominous vapor darts…from nowhere to cast upon love done its sharpened jaw: Yet above, tiny stars could not resist their marquee of blinks, a luster divine that I find grandeur aloft in night’s mist absorbing tender pleasures quite benign. How beautiful a gentle eve when viewed, Through womanly fortitude now imbued. 1/11/2017 John Hamilton’s Beautiful Sadness Contest

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Date: 1/17/2019 12:12:00 PM
Congrats Nette on your placement. Hugs.
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Date: 1/16/2019 7:54:00 AM
Nette, this poem conjures so many interesting images. I loved reading it this morning. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/16/2019 6:46:00 AM
Nette, congrats on your win for this beautiful sonnet. John
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Date: 1/15/2019 3:48:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win with this beautiful write ~
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Date: 1/15/2019 11:34:00 AM
You have simply outdone yourself with this one Nette! Such unique word combinations, but they don't feel forced, just rolls off the tongue so elegantly, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 1/14/2019 6:08:00 PM
I can only echo the comments of the others: A beauteous, beautiful sonnet indeed. A sure winner for the contest. A FAVE for me was well. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/13/2019 1:47:00 PM
This so beautiful, Nette :).You have created a beautiful painting in words an artist you are. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:15:00 AM
A brilliant poem, awesome and written with passion as are all your poems. Good luck - you are an amazing awe inspiring poetess! Poetry Hugs and wishes, Jennifer
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Date: 1/13/2019 1:28:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Nette, words so well chosen.
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Date: 1/12/2019 11:45:00 AM
WEll, frist of what an excellent sonnet... The flow and rhymes I do like very much.. And so much beautiful sadnes in it also....
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Date: 1/12/2019 7:41:00 AM
A wonderful write, as always..all the best, Nette.
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Date: 1/12/2019 7:19:00 AM
Beautifully done, best of luck.
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Date: 1/11/2019 11:39:00 PM
I quite enjoyed this, is funny the co incidences at times as I am working on something similar! Lovely sonnet.
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:46:00 PM
This is deep and beautiful Nette! I enjoyed it ! :)
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:19:00 PM
Beautiful Nette very beautiful my friend!!
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:17:00 PM
I always wonder at the ease with which you express your thoughts, turning even sadness into moments of beauty. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:02:00 PM
Powerful well written verse of a beautiful sadness Nette. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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