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Sad ''Tears''

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sad the muse sleeping muse muse Calliope of epic poetry muse Melponmene of tragedy tragedy and a child mournful tragedy born in childhood cannot tell will not tell tell how this child was inspired tell why words fill her dreams dreams that swirl within dreams that torture the night on paper the child writes this paper paper paper that bleeds with words words pour out sadness words dripping deep pain a child doomed to tears sad the tears tears of deep sadness tears rich with blood blood and poems intertwined blood that the muses desire please you ask show to us show show us how to comfort her show us why she has this skill skill the Lord above bestowed skill only the fly on the wall observes a child poet little poet poet of a thousand words poet of dancing prose prose inspired by life prose elegant and beautiful poetry poetry poetry of rhyme and lyric one day to be poetry that tells a story story of a journey story of a shattered heart cannot tell will not tell tell you how the child spins the words tell how words became writing writing that leaves beauty writing always leaving sad tears tears of the innocent . . . tears fall as I realize the child dreaming is me . . . _________________ May 12, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/sad ''tears'' Copyright Protected, ID 05-572-488-12 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Show Don't Tell, sponsor, Thomas Martin, Judged 2015 First Place

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/26/2015 1:03:00 PM

Very powerful, Broken. Congratulations on your fine First Place win in this contest! Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/24/2015 3:20:00 PM

Broken, Conrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/24/2015 4:14:00 AM

Incredible piece! I love how each word, attaches another, and just drifts into another line so masterfully.. you've got a lot of emotional, passionate and beautiful pieces. This one is heartrending, entrancing. Truly a brilliant piece!! Always, Laura

Nandita Das

Date: 5/23/2015 9:03:00 AM

Congratulations. A deserving winner.

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 5/22/2015 8:07:00 AM

Glad to read and share such an owesome poem. Congs on winning too dear one Hugs, Bryan

John Lawless

Date: 5/22/2015 7:28:00 AM

WOW.....and again.....WOW......Somehow this poem under the pen name Broken Wings is inherently sad but harbors the seed of hope. Thanks for this one. After reading it I fell silent and reflective.

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 5/22/2015 7:10:00 AM

Powerful piece here, Broken Wings!!! ...... heartfelt n soulful.... Congrats on your big win!

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2015 7:07:00 PM

Congratulations. SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 5/21/2015 1:40:00 PM

I felt chocked reading this a wonderful write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/17/2015 4:44:00 PM

Interesting how a sad and broken heart can form poetry of beauty. Already I begin to feel saddened and subdued from reading this piece. Your sad but talented child poet is described very clearly.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2015 9:22:00 PM

Full of sincere emotion and very beautiful indeed in its lyricism, Constance. I really dig the way you repeat some of the same front words of lines. This is a form called Blitz? very interesting one! I'm sure Thomas will love it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2015 1:00:00 PM

Very emotive and expressive work..I think it fits the theme very well..Thanks for dropping by my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/13/2015 8:59:00 AM

I sense sadness when I read this ...your words have a life energy that moves me emotionally. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2015 7:54:00 AM

- A work of art that gives me "lump" in my throat .... so deeply moving, but really beautiful written, B.W. (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/13/2015 7:43:00 AM

You have done a masterful job with the form. The picture is also very effective.

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/13/2015 6:18:00 AM

Another deeply emotive write, BW. Sad writes seem to be where your muse is at her most creative. I just wish the sadness will go away. Good luck in the contest! Kim

Nandita Das

Date: 5/12/2015 7:32:00 PM

Oh Broken Wings, let me wipe away your tears but first let me wipe mine. Such a sad, heartfelt write. Touched me deeply. Yes, your pen drips tears. Your pen truly weeps in this deeply sad write....Excellent . 7