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Bartolomeo Giuliano "La bonita" (1892) de Candela Sauco

Rain poured the night before Reviving cobblestone Ribbons round tambourine Rollick, she kept ringing Response of the peasants Remarkable impact. Ray of blush on her face 9/2/2023

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Date: 9/5/2023 4:22:00 PM
Nice Pleiades, Eve. I really like this form. I've written them before but not for a while. Time to write another one. Yours is very good, my friend. I'm thinking contest winner ... good luck! Bill
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Date: 9/4/2023 4:50:00 PM
I had to use one of your lines in my poem. I was'nt looking for it but my muse found it. this is nicely done. P.S. I haven't posted it yet
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Date: 9/4/2023 2:08:00 AM
very intriguing piece enjoyed reading your lovely work.
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Date: 9/3/2023 12:52:00 PM
Splendid poem Eve. I like this form very much.
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Date: 9/3/2023 11:07:00 AM
Fantastic painting, and use of the form. Really like this one iEve! Pangie
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Date: 9/3/2023 8:44:00 AM
Oh what an excellent medley of words my dear friend... I like the word choices here and how you have arranged them and a very different use of the letter R.. Always a pleasure to read your words.
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Date: 9/3/2023 8:16:00 AM
I adore your pleiades poem, particularly the enchanting 'R' charm that illuminates it so gracefully! Your choice of perspective to convey the exploration of extensive imagery and interpretations is truly singular.
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Date: 9/3/2023 7:28:00 AM
This is brilliant i love the flow of your pleiades! So good! A winner for me. Goodluck in the contest
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Date: 9/3/2023 4:16:00 AM
- Eve, a great Pleiades poem ... well done :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 9/2/2023 8:53:00 PM
A very humble and uplifting story, Eve, made me smile :)
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