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Sara Etgen-Baker with Fritz von Etgen, circa 1961

You squealed with six-year old delight as I wriggled from Hilda’s belly. I was a runt, the first of five pups who, with our eyes closed, all squirmed for lunch at the same. You screamed with horror as Hilda shoved me away, stepping on my tiny Dachshund tail and breaking it. You saved me, nursing me with love and feeding me warm milk laced with Karo syrup. I nestled in your doll’s blanket safe and out of harm’s way knowing you’d always be by my side. After 14 days I miraculously opened my eyes. You named me Fritz, a name I rather liked because it means ‘peaceful ruler’ in German. We grew up together often sitting together on the back porch where I showered you with Doxie kisses. You indulged me with cookies and snacks from your school knapsack while petting my elongated belly and back. You nurtured my German heritage, sometimes satisfying my love for sauerkraut and German lager beer. You taught me German and introduced me to Frieda, the beautiful female Dachshund who lived down the street. Wunderbar! "Ich liebe sie!" You understood my German ‘wanderlust,’ always finding me but never scolding me when I ventured too far from home. You confided in me, sharing your deepest thoughts and secrets, occasionally seeking my advice. Unfortunately I didn’t speak your teenage language. I did my best, though, Listening intently, tilting my head side-to-side, looking at you with my encouraging eyes, wagging my tail, and barking hoping you’d understand. For 12 years I peacefully ruled your life, or rather you ruled mine. When I became old and ill, my days numbered, you stayed by my side like I knew you would. I miss you and am waiting for you--on the other side. Written June 4, 2022 Personification Contest Entry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 8/15/2023 6:15:00 AM
My friend, this is absolutely a wonderful poem! That is the kind of love that as kids we had for our pets!. For me this is a shining gem. and a new fav. God bless you.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/15/2023 4:47:00 PM
I agree, Robert, we loved our beloved doxie. I have so few pictures of us taken with him. Thanks for your compliments and for making this poem a fav.
Date: 2/19/2023 7:59:00 AM
Wonderful Personification poetry, Sara. I can feel the love you had for this "runt of the litter". Thanks for sharing such a personal story through your poetry. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/19/2023 12:05:00 PM
thanks my true love for your supportive words whether those words are prose or poetic in form. I couldn't do it without you!
Date: 8/13/2022 4:27:00 PM
A convincingly moving account of affection flowing from a much-loved Dachshund to his girl companion. Told with conviction and devotion. Congratulations! Robert
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/28/2022 2:46:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem memorializing my beloved Doxie, Fritz von Etgen. You're right...we were companions extraordinaire. I appreciate your kind comments! Enjoy your evening
Date: 7/21/2022 2:05:00 PM
Sara, such a beautiful and sad poem, congratulations on your win in my contest, blessings ~Constance
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/21/2022 2:15:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, for your kind words. I'm honored to have won in your contest--my first contest in poetry soup! I'm a memoirist at heart and focus primarily on writing short vignettes. Occasionally, a poem 'comes' to me. I also spend a great deal of time writing for Chicken Soup for the Soul and for Guideposts. Anyway, I digress. I appreciate your kindness. I also appreciate your supporting my hubby Bill Baker, the poet in our house. I'm grateful and blessed.
Date: 7/9/2022 3:38:00 PM
Well this beautiful story ended in me being tears. How fortunate you were to have found each other to love. I must fave this because it is so heart warming. Congratulations on your win Sara. Blessings xxoo
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/9/2022 3:59:00 PM
ahhhh, thanks Connie. I do appreciate your reading and 'faving' my poem. Yes, Fritz and I were both fortunate to share many years together. Have a great weekend!
Date: 7/1/2022 11:53:00 AM
Wow! Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/1/2022 12:57:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem...and thanks for the congratulations as well. Enjoy your day
Date: 7/1/2022 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write/story/tribute/picture. Love It. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/1/2022 12:56:00 PM
my win....wasn't aware....awesome! Thanks for reading and commenting. Enjoy your July 4th!
Date: 6/5/2022 7:53:00 PM
Endearing poem Sara...much enjoyed! james
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 6/6/2022 3:14:00 AM
thank you, kind sir, for reading my little poem and for commenting. Have a great week.
Date: 6/4/2022 6:40:00 PM
Sara, such a heart-warming story about your Fritz. You told it well, with lines that could easily be read aloud. Also, not once did you break the stream of personification, and that is not so easy, I think. Thanks for sharing.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 6/5/2022 3:05:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, for reading my first attempt at personification and for your kind words about its structure and heartfelt remembrance. Have a great Sunday.
Date: 6/4/2022 3:23:00 PM
A beautiful Personification and tribute to Fritz, the runt of the litter. Thanks for sharing your love for Fritz with us, Sara. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 6/4/2022 3:39:00 PM
thank you for reading my first attempt at a personification poem. You have a great weekend as well

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