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Ruby Rivers

Rolling ruby rivers reflect
Recovered roses' refined respect
Releasing reborn, renegade rainbows
Redeemed regret rarely regrows

7/21/22

rainbowrecovery fromrememberrhyme

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Bill Baker

July 26, 2022 at 8:24 AM

Revealing, rich, reverence, really Thank you "R" for sharing through your poetry. Nice entry, Michelle, good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Harry Horsman

July 24, 2022 at 6:27 AM

Clever poetry, love the flow Michelle, not easy as these to write.,

Rico Leffanta

July 22, 2022 at 6:27 PM

Enjoyed more than, "round the rough and rugged rocks", but imagine how Brits would read this aloud (those who substitute a "w" for "r") Aloha!

Jim Slaughter

July 22, 2022 at 10:31 AM

Good one, Michelle. I love alliteration...and I really like "renegade rainbows".

Mystic Rose Rose

July 22, 2022 at 9:53 AM

Your revel in the roll of words so well, I love it, gl in the contest Michelle, :)

Sotto Poet

July 22, 2022 at 5:01 AM

This seems as if the winning submission for me and features a memorable concluding sentence, making it a perfect fit. Michelle, my dear friend, I wish you the best of luck in the contest!