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Ruby Rivers

Rolling ruby rivers reflect Recovered roses' refined respect Releasing reborn, renegade rainbows Redeemed regret rarely regrows 7/21/22

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/26/2022 8:24:00 AM

Revealing, rich, reverence, really Thank you "R" for sharing through your poetry. Nice entry, Michelle, good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/24/2022 6:27:00 AM

Clever poetry, love the flow Michelle, not easy as these to write.,

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/22/2022 6:27:00 PM

Enjoyed more than, "round the rough and rugged rocks", but imagine how Brits would read this aloud (those who substitute a "w" for "r") Aloha!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 7/22/2022 10:31:00 AM

Good one, Michelle. I love alliteration...and I really like "renegade rainbows".

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/22/2022 9:53:00 AM

Your revel in the roll of words so well, I love it, gl in the contest Michelle, :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 5:01:00 AM

This seems as if the winning submission for me and features a memorable concluding sentence, making it a perfect fit. Michelle, my dear friend, I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

Valsa George

Date: 7/21/2022 8:55:00 PM

Beautifully alliterative, and closed with a catching line, fully satisfying the parameters of the contest! All the best dear friend, Michelle !

Anil Deo

Date: 7/21/2022 8:50:00 PM

Well Sis, the last line may approach a biblical truth. Rrrrest Assured, no rrrreligion!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/21/2022 8:43:00 PM

The second line blows me away. I'm still recovering. Thanks, gw

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/21/2022 8:07:00 PM

This is amazing Michelle, where else can we see renegade rainbows, very clever, enjoyed. GL in contest! ~Anaya

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/21/2022 8:09:00 PM

Appreciate your kind words, thank you Anaya~