Ruby Rivers

Rolling ruby rivers reflect
Recovered roses' refined respect
Releasing reborn, renegade rainbows
Redeemed regret rarely regrows

7/21/22

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Date: 7/26/2022 8:24:00 AM
Revealing, rich, reverence, really Thank you "R" for sharing through your poetry. Nice entry, Michelle, good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 7/24/2022 6:27:00 AM
Clever poetry, love the flow Michelle, not easy as these to write.,
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Date: 7/22/2022 6:27:00 PM
Enjoyed more than, "round the rough and rugged rocks", but imagine how Brits would read this aloud (those who substitute a "w" for "r") Aloha!
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Date: 7/22/2022 10:31:00 AM
Good one, Michelle. I love alliteration...and I really like "renegade rainbows".
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Date: 7/22/2022 9:53:00 AM
Your revel in the roll of words so well, I love it, gl in the contest Michelle, :)
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Date: 7/22/2022 5:01:00 AM
This seems as if the winning submission for me and features a memorable concluding sentence, making it a perfect fit. Michelle, my dear friend, I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/21/2022 8:55:00 PM
Beautifully alliterative, and closed with a catching line, fully satisfying the parameters of the contest! All the best dear friend, Michelle !
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Date: 7/21/2022 8:50:00 PM
Well Sis, the last line may approach a biblical truth. Rrrrest Assured, no rrrreligion!
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Date: 7/21/2022 8:43:00 PM
The second line blows me away. I'm still recovering. Thanks, gw
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Date: 7/21/2022 8:07:00 PM
This is amazing Michelle, where else can we see renegade rainbows, very clever, enjoyed. GL in contest! ~Anaya
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/21/2022 8:09:00 PM
Appreciate your kind words, thank you Anaya~
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