Rose-Lynn

Far within the forest deep,
where Pixies play and the Willows weep.
There lies a pond with lilies pink,
that within the night, the stars do wink.

Those that the pond loves and feels,
has respect for the Magi ways, will reveal,
to the one who gently sips,
the wish it will grant from whispered lips.

Not far from there, within a glen,
resides a lovely lass named Rose-Lynn.
With hair the color of brandied wine,
adorned with sweet Hydrangea entwined.

A fey woman-child, our Rose-Lynn be,
who walks between dreams and reality.
Born to the woodland Fairy folk one night,
from a Star Flower in the moonbeams sight.

Raised on honey and Humming Bird eggs,
sprinkled with stardust and nutmeg.
Her skin as pale and smooth as Thistle milk,
she wears a dress spun from soft spiders silk.

In the forest she spends her days,
her laughter like bells, while she plays.
Though she loves the life she's given,
it is the wind in her hair, to which she is driven.

She watches the birds while they fly,
as they dip and weave, she gives a soft sigh.
As she watches she wishes with all her might,
that she could join them in their flight.

One day she chanced to find the cool pond,
that called to her to look upon,
its surface that reflected the world around.
Rose-Lynn curled herself, next to it, on the ground.

Rose-Lynn heard her name sweetly spoken,
as though a lover, offering a token.
It bade of her to gently sip,
and whisper softly, her fondest wish.

No sooner had she sipped and whispered thus,
the ponds surface was rippled in a wind gust.
Upon the surface settling once again,
there was a new reflection of Rose-Lynn.

There from her shoulders were wings, snow white.
That would enable, Rose-Lynn her flight.
The voice told Rose-Lynn, the wings would be hers,
all she need do was to whisper one word.

Rose-Lynn stared at her reflection,
at the wings pure perfection.
She didn't need to take time to guess,
with a smile, Rose-Lynn, whispered "yes".


Paula Swanson

For the contest:  Reflection
Sponsored by Constance "A Rambling Poet"
Placement: 1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Paula! Always, Annalise
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March 2, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations Paula on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 1:20 PM
glad to see this one placed high, Paula. a belated congrats to you. YOu did awesome with it!!
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February 28, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Congratulations on the win with a wonderfull poem
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Paula in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Hey Paula, congratulations on your first place win in the contest :)
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February 27, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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February 26, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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February 26, 2011 at 3:51 PM
Very pretty and a fine first place winner. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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February 26, 2011 at 10:51 AM
Congrats Paula on your first place win in Reflections contest .. so happy to be sharing first with a great friend too.. with lots of luv..
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February 26, 2011 at 7:30 AM
Great job Paula, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's first place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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February 25, 2011 at 10:30 PM
congratulations Paula on a great result in your win in the reflections Contest.
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February 25, 2011 at 9:04 PM
Awesome...a lovely story and Im going to put this in my favs. congrats to you and Rose-Lynn.BG
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February 25, 2011 at 6:09 PM
This is an amazing write !Congrats on your 1st place win Paula----kashinath
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February 25, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Lovely entry, Paula! Almost a song....! Congratulations on your wonderful, well deserved win! ~ Love, Carrie
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February 25, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Constance, paula
Pettit Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 5:16 PM
I missed reading this one before the end of the contest. I'm glad I read it now. Congratulations on your first place finish in Constance's contest.
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 10:46 AM
Good luck in the contest with this interesting work..Reads like a winner..Sara
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February 21, 2011 at 6:54 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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February 20, 2011 at 10:14 PM
oh, wow, yours is super descriptive, paula. and I honestly did not know she was looking at a winged reflection until I saw most of the others were writing of her as an angel. So I felt so silly not doing mine about an angel. I just love how you made her BECOME the angel since I saw no trace of wings on her back in the picture. Very nicely done!
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February 20, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Well, I changed treaded to stepped. Different dictionaries have different perspectives on this and one said "trod" was the past tense of tread. To avoid confusion I went with stepped. You know I am something of a grammarian and have researched this extensively now. Some say treaded is fine, some say trod and some say tread. Yikes -- the can opened and worms spilled everywhere! Love, Carolyn
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February 20, 2011 at 3:10 PM
Hi Paula, thanks for your comment. I looked it up as Microsoft Word's spell check said treaded was okay. The Encarta North America Dictionary says it is the past tense of tread and acceptable. I do appreciate the suggestion though. Love, Carolyn
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February 20, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Magnificent, Paula. I saw wings in the pool as well. Didn't know they were hyacinths in her hair -- thought perhaps hydrangea, but wasn't sure. I like the way this supernatural girl sprouted wings. She seems to be an angel! Love, Carolyn
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