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Poetry/Verse/Rose
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1631-553-23
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 23, 2024
For the International Contest Bite Size Poem No. 83
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 03/26/2024

Second Place

Free rose watercolor pink illustration

Dew-drops came at dawn, bringing the sun's warmth; and a rose with folded petals, caught one dew-drop and unfurled. Seeing just one time the beautiful sky, for a girl passed and picked her for a vase.

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Robert Sidwell

Date: 3/29/2024 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win for this beautiful, creative poem with a brilliant twist!

Constance La France
Date: 3/29/2024 3:54:00 PM

Robert, thank you for the congratulations, compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/27/2024 4:22:00 AM

Congratulations, Constance! Your poem is a breathtaking portrayal of nature's beauty and life's fleeting moments. The imagery is enchanting, evoking a sense of wonder and appreciation. Your poetic talent shines brightly, deserving recognition in the contest. Well done on your well-deserved victory! - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2024 7:31:00 AM

Daniel, thank you for the compliment, congratulations and lovely comment, hugs, Constance

Valsa George

Date: 3/26/2024 10:16:00 PM

Beautiful poem dear Constance. Sad the lovely flower couldn't parade her beauty before the world for long. Congratulations Constance on your great win.

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2024 7:32:00 AM

Valsa, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, hugs, Constance