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Rosabel



An enchanting movement with green eyes allure......
twilight wistful along passionate stream flow......
a rapture spills free on untouched dreams of pure...... 
this theatrical moment loves grace bestow 
lightly brushed vineyards flow through innocent land
suggestive submission, I reach for her hand......
purification in her loving demure......
subtle songs of desire within hearts stir...... 


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/6/2011 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. You have some great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:30:00 PM
Wow. This is really, really good. I love the line 'lightly brushed vineyards...' Excellent writing. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Well deserved. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Rick on this lovely tribute. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:49:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry my friend.. superb as always.. enjoy with luv...
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/24/2011 2:02:00 PM
Hello Rick, Congratulations on your win, this is a very lovely poem you have written here. As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/24/2011 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations Rick. This is a well deserved winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/24/2011 12:19:00 PM
Awwh! Just beautiful, Rick!! Congratulations on your 5th Place win in the contest with this wonderful Rispetto! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/24/2011 11:12:00 AM
The reader can feel the desire and love in your words, Rick. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2011 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your 5th place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win inb my contest, Rick
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:56:00 AM
So full of romance, excuse me for intruding... Wel written!
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Date: 1/8/2011 9:11:00 AM
nice work Rick, been a while since I've been on here...but a certain person keeps replying on my old poetry, so thought I'd come back again...
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Date: 1/7/2011 10:56:00 PM
Hey, please remind me what I said about Linda and what she wasn't getting!! I am clueless (and with very short memory apparently!)
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Date: 1/7/2011 10:37:00 PM
What a beautiful title and name, Rosabel. Is this someone you know? I really loved the line 5. It rings with imagery. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/7/2011 6:07:00 PM
enjoyed the green eyes allure line....
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Date: 1/7/2011 4:50:00 PM
A divine read Rick and such lovely words used to express this creature... good luck in Dr. Ram's challenging Rispetto contest... appreciate your enocuraging words on my entry too..luv.. happy weekend..
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Date: 1/7/2011 4:05:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 1/7/2011 3:59:00 PM
It feels as if I am watching from the balcony....a lovely ballet of words!! :)
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Date: 1/7/2011 2:49:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Rick
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