Rosabel

An enchanting movement with green eyes allure...... twilight wistful along passionate stream flow...... a rapture spills free on untouched dreams of pure...... this theatrical moment loves grace bestow lightly brushed vineyards flow through innocent land suggestive submission, I reach for her hand...... purification in her loving demure...... subtle songs of desire within hearts stir...... _______________ Contest

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/6/2011 5:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. You have some great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.

Deb Radke

Date: 1/26/2011 8:30:00 PM

Wow. This is really, really good. I love the line 'lightly brushed vineyards...' Excellent writing. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Well deserved. Best wishes. Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rick, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:43:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick on this lovely tribute. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 4:49:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry my friend.. superb as always.. enjoy with luv...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2011 4:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/24/2011 2:02:00 PM

Hello Rick, Congratulations on your win, this is a very lovely poem you have written here. As Always, Shar

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/24/2011 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations Rick. This is a well deserved winner. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/24/2011 12:19:00 PM

Awwh! Just beautiful, Rick!! Congratulations on your 5th Place win in the contest with this wonderful Rispetto! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 11:12:00 AM

The reader can feel the desire and love in your words, Rick. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your 5th place win. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2011 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on the well deserved win inb my contest, Rick

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/13/2011 1:56:00 AM

So full of romance, excuse me for intruding... Wel written!

Michael Hornschuch

Date: 1/8/2011 9:11:00 AM

nice work Rick, been a while since I've been on here...but a certain person keeps replying on my old poetry, so thought I'd come back again...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2011 10:56:00 PM

Hey, please remind me what I said about Linda and what she wasn't getting!! I am clueless (and with very short memory apparently!)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2011 10:37:00 PM

What a beautiful title and name, Rosabel. Is this someone you know? I really loved the line 5. It rings with imagery. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/7/2011 6:07:00 PM

enjoyed the green eyes allure line....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/7/2011 4:50:00 PM

A divine read Rick and such lovely words used to express this creature... good luck in Dr. Ram's challenging Rispetto contest... appreciate your enocuraging words on my entry too..luv.. happy weekend..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2011 4:05:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Good luck..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/7/2011 3:59:00 PM

It feels as if I am watching from the balcony....a lovely ballet of words!! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/7/2011 2:49:00 PM

Thanks for participating in my contest, Rick