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Romantic Charm In 4 Lines - Your Smile Is My Sunshine

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I place petals upon each path you tread, so those chocolate brown eyes feel no pain. I promise to kiss away each tear you shed, for your smile is my sunshine in cold rain. Silent One 13 February 2018 Example for Romantic charm in 4 lines contest

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Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/17/2018 3:19:00 PM

Sweet charming romantic poem! Great! I enjoyed it. Keep it up Silent One.

Silent One
Date: 3/18/2018 10:33:00 AM

Thanks..

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/17/2018 3:16:00 PM

Sweet charming romantic poem! Great! I enjoyed it. Keep it up Silent One.

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/17/2018 10:57:00 AM

I must've read this at least 10x... and still swooning over it :)

Silent One
Date: 3/18/2018 10:33:00 AM

Thanks Kina.. Guess this one is your favourite..

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2018 12:36:00 PM

Indeed, this is romantic, S-1. Effortless rhyme, too. Regards // paul

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/27/2018 2:14:00 PM

Love the first line such a nice romantic piece. love phyl

Alisa Balaieva

Date: 2/25/2018 10:47:00 AM

I fall in love with this poem. Great one!

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/24/2018 11:21:00 AM

Silent One, so full of protective and impassioned love and ardent devotion.. just beautiful. Swooning poetry!

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/18/2018 1:31:00 PM

hi silent , your sweet words speaks a lot and break the silence............The idea of placing petals for kissing the tears is matchless .............i love your write......

Marc Acrich

Date: 2/17/2018 4:45:00 PM

Carole Duet

Date: 2/13/2018 8:29:00 PM

This is incredibly deep and I love every line. I can't even make up my mind which line is my favorite because they all are but I guess it would be "your smile is my sunshine in cold rain".

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:40:00 PM

Thank you for reading all ofthem Carole..