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Romantic charm in 4 lines - Your smile is my sunshine

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I place petals upon each path you tread, so those chocolate brown eyes feel no pain. I promise to kiss away each tear you shed, for your smile is my sunshine in cold rain.
Silent One 13 February 2018 Example for Romantic charm in 4 lines contest

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Date: 3/17/2018 3:19:00 PM
Sweet charming romantic poem! Great! I enjoyed it. Keep it up Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 3/18/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 3/17/2018 3:16:00 PM
Sweet charming romantic poem! Great! I enjoyed it. Keep it up Silent One.
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Date: 3/17/2018 10:57:00 AM
I must've read this at least 10x... and still swooning over it :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/18/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Kina.. Guess this one is your favourite..
Date: 3/1/2018 12:36:00 PM
Indeed, this is romantic, S-1. Effortless rhyme, too. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/27/2018 2:14:00 PM
Love the first line such a nice romantic piece. love phyl
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Date: 2/25/2018 10:47:00 AM
I fall in love with this poem. Great one!
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Date: 2/24/2018 11:21:00 AM
Silent One, so full of protective and impassioned love and ardent devotion.. just beautiful. Swooning poetry!
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Date: 2/18/2018 1:31:00 PM
hi silent , your sweet words speaks a lot and break the silence............The idea of placing petals for kissing the tears is matchless .............i love your write......
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Date: 2/17/2018 4:45:00 PM
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Date: 2/13/2018 8:29:00 PM
This is incredibly deep and I love every line. I can't even make up my mind which line is my favorite because they all are but I guess it would be "your smile is my sunshine in cold rain".
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thank you for reading all ofthem Carole..
Date: 2/13/2018 7:14:00 PM
I have picked my favourite and its this one over the Free Verse saving it for a read and reread. Brilliant words Si....Maria
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Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:41:00 PM
Thank you for reading all of them Maria..
Date: 2/13/2018 5:44:00 PM
so sweet, Silent One. Let me read all your examples. I do hope to try this one soon. Thanks for my placement in your last contest.
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, this one should be an easy one for you..
Date: 2/13/2018 4:58:00 PM
I'm just drooling over this one! I love love love it :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Kina..
Date: 2/13/2018 4:45:00 PM
I am a sucker for rhyme. My favourite so far.
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Jean..
Date: 2/13/2018 3:38:00 PM
Swoon!...I think wanting to take someones pain is a great testimony of true love... charming indeed :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Chris... I think this one will appeal to those with brown eyes..
Date: 2/13/2018 3:19:00 PM
Silent, so full of love, another great example for your contest
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thank you BW...
Date: 2/13/2018 1:49:00 PM
- A sweet, one ... - Love it :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 2/13/2018 9:55:00 AM
I read all four of these "4 line" pieces, S O, and this is my favorite. They're all lovely.
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:26:00 AM
This one is probably my favourite also, thank you Jim..
Date: 2/13/2018 8:06:00 AM
Dripping with love and devotion ... a valentine verse at it's very best. Another amazing example Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Judy..
Date: 2/13/2018 7:57:00 AM
More please... I'm all a-tingle!!!!!!
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:27:00 AM
I think 4 is enough for one day my friend..
Date: 2/13/2018 6:50:00 AM
How beautiful.!
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:27:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 2/13/2018 6:20:00 AM
Another sweet poem, sure to please her!
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:27:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 2/13/2018 5:42:00 AM
LOvely too
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Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Arturo..