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Affection of Older Autumn

It is late September again, effervescent, fair---much like the first touch of air-brushed flame seizing an ardor glazed by an ever- changing pastel light… we are still here, on autumnal view's entrance breathing sweet ambrosia from life's harvest...perhaps older as grey marbles collected through fables of silence together : our weary bodies are held by endless glow past mid-life, recalling youth's blazed affection while evening fog embraces us, through a tender contentment of devotion's soft kisses. Contest 340 for Brian Strand

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Date: 10/22/2017 8:54:00 PM
Hello Nette, your poem is beautifully written for the season autumn. Have anice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/21/2017 10:15:00 AM
Nette, I feel you.
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Date: 10/2/2017 9:44:00 AM
Nette, beautifully penned CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 10/2/2017 12:03:00 AM
Nette, the words of your poem are beautiful to read. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your top win. ~ Sonia
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Date: 10/1/2017 11:08:00 PM
Very lovely, Nette! Congrats on your top win! Janice
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Date: 9/22/2017 3:51:00 PM
Whew! Caliente sensuous poetry, Nette. Never knew nature love could arouse such passion. Autumn sparks are more than just fall's blazing colors. Picture perfect poem w/sizzling imagery. Love and hugs forever.
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:27:00 AM
Brilliant and beautiful, Nette:)
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:23:00 AM
Brilliant write as always, Nette! Thanks for sharing this literary gem with us! :-)
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Date: 9/21/2017 11:44:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette, your pen flows golden in this write, sure to be a winner, it is in my book anyway!
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Date: 9/21/2017 9:40:00 PM
Nette, this stunning my vision was the outdoors was in love with autumn more than lovers .. just beautiful .. hugs Eve
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Date: 9/21/2017 7:43:00 PM
Nette, this is absolutely brilliant. FAVE!
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Date: 9/21/2017 4:16:00 PM
Wow, Nette, you have outdone yourself with your incredible write! I really enjoyed reading this delightful autumnal treat you have left for us to read this afternoon! What a glorious piece, you have enthralled me completely by this beautiful poem my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/21/2017 2:05:00 PM
A wondrous poem dearest, nette! The magic of the language used obliterates the autumn's beauty! Hugs! Good luck!
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Date: 9/21/2017 1:28:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Nette - The last line is perfect :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2017 12:54:00 PM
can I live the life you write about?a very sensual poem that leads the mind from one flower to another...good luck
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Date: 9/21/2017 10:07:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, Nette!
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Date: 9/21/2017 9:01:00 AM
A wonderful melody written with precious words--lovely as always--best wishes for a win, nette!
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