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Road of Grief

kept long-stemmed red leaf on this road of grief a prayer of quick-sand in touch of our hands 10/8/2022

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 10/12/2022 2:48:00 PM

Kim, I guess I need to find out what a jueju is but the imagery in the poem is quite marvelous.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/10/2022 7:15:00 AM

Shared grief and prayer - I like it. Lovely write Kim. Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2022 8:48:00 AM

such an interesting image to have it be quick sand in the hand. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2022 10:27:00 AM

A prayer from a raw and similar circumstance.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/8/2022 7:56:00 PM

Much to ponder here, Madame Poet. Thanks, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2022 7:04:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/8/2022 5:29:00 PM

Wonderfully done, dearest Kim. Be blessed!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2022 7:04:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios!

Bill Baker

Date: 10/8/2022 3:49:00 PM

Tough form of poetry, Kim, but well written. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2022 4:43:00 PM

Thanks, Bill!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/8/2022 1:05:00 PM

Lovely write Kim and so was your theme...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2022 1:16:00 PM

Thank you, Mike!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/8/2022 12:48:00 PM

Beautiful Juju KIM You did a fantastic job of capturing the waning anguish in your writing. Beautifully colorful, albeit gloomy,

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2022 1:16:00 PM

Though gloomy, there is beauty there in, joining to pray. Thank you, Lasaad!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/8/2022 11:18:00 AM

Beautifully vibrant, though melancholic, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2022 1:15:00 PM

Thank you. When two souls touch, not necessarily with equal grief, but where one leads in prayer, soon after a raw loss, to attend to one in need - as if in quicksand yet God holds them fast on solid ground. God bless you, Evelyn <3