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Ripples of Light

Night beckons distant stars to show their gleam in twinkling delight, As Luna shines its light glistening on the ocean, with waves capture its golden glow ripples of light dancing on the sea, as waves gently roll to the sandy shore

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 7:44:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph! :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/11/2023 6:37:00 PM

Well done Joseph, congrats on your worthy win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 10:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Joseph :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 8:00:00 AM

Its the imagery and how magical it is here, the way your descriptive words flow, that made me go wow! I absolutely love this etheree, the way you show us this beautiful scenery whilst sticking to syllables and keeping them intact is beyond impressive! I love the dreamy way moon glistens and reflects and ocean, how it captures the golden glow! Any moon poem leaves me in awe and you’ve done it in sheer eloquence! Thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/4/2023 2:56:00 AM

Splendid Etheree. your imagery excels. Blessings.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/3/2023 6:38:00 PM

"Distant stars show their gleam on the ocean." Such a beautiful image to behold. The night sky is so dreamy and romantic, and your thoughts caress softly around me. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/3/2023 8:49:00 AM

I can picture it, Joe! Awesome!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2023 8:08:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Joseph :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/3/2023 7:59:00 AM

Beautiful hues you convey, Joseph. Much enjoyed the imagery.