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Rick's Hexaverse Universe

. * Sky gazing tonight * * * constellations and * the milky way high * * * beyond our reach I * * wish Mars was nearer * spy a planet o * * evening star~~~~~~~# lookout! shooting * star blew past me ~~~~~~*** ~~~~*#* * Jupiter, * ~~~ Venus and * ~~~~ Uranus * Like hot ++++++++++++Lovers ~~~~~Shine

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations Doris on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/15/2010 6:15:00 PM

Congratulations Doris on your poem's worthiness i it's placement. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations onj this wonderful win, Doris

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/17/2010 9:04:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/17/2010 7:47:00 AM

nice one Doris, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Doris in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/17/2010 12:07:00 AM

Doris awesome congrats on your win in Rick's contest ~ Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/16/2010 10:21:00 PM

Lovely one Doris. many congratulations on your win.

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/16/2010 9:03:00 PM

Congratulations Doris. Charles

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2010 8:21:00 PM

Congratulations on 11th place. This poem is so creative, it should have received a much higher placement in my opinion~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2010 3:19:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your super win in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece.. enjoy your sweet victory my friend with luv..

James Fraser

Date: 9/16/2010 1:26:00 PM

Congratulation's Doris on your fine win in Rick's contest, I really like this celestial gem you have scribed >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 12:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest, Doris! Well done. Love, Carolyn

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/11/2010 10:29:00 AM

Very starry. The last lines are great.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2010 1:19:00 PM

So glad to hear you are on the mend, Doris! Thanks for getting back to me. Love, Carolyn

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/9/2010 7:39:00 AM

I LOVE IT. Yes this star gazer loves anything to do with astronomy and I will see if I have time to enter this one. Good luck in the contest. God Bless PHYL

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/8/2010 8:39:00 PM

Very nice, Doris. Love the layout too! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn