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Revenge of the Trampled Rose

In the beginning, their new life together was a bed of roses and nothing could smell as sweet! Her heart opened up - a delicate red beauty. One day - foolishly - he trampled that rose red heart. Soon he was to learn there’s no rose without a thorn, and that scorned beauty left her sharpest thorn for him. Alimony’s sting pricks him endlessly, and now. . . . nothing’s coming up roses. Inspired by Paula Swanson's "Trample" Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/18/2015 4:38:00 PM
Great write Andrea...enjoyed..hugs
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Date: 2/20/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on the super win in ~Paula's~ "Trample" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:36:00 AM
Terrific take on the contest theme Andrea. Most deserved of it's win in Paula's contest, many congrats :) xx
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Date: 2/18/2012 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/18/2012 4:12:00 AM
Congrata knew it was a winner xx
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Another super write. :)
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Date: 2/17/2012 3:04:00 PM
Andrea, this is an amazingly well written poem. I really enjoyed it. Thank You. Congrats on winning 2nd place in Paula's contest...........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/17/2012 11:38:00 AM
Wonderful write ,Andrea.Very educative.Congratulations on your win...Thanks for sharing.....
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Date: 2/17/2012 9:05:00 AM
That last line sums it up, (sadly) for so many lost loves! Congratulations on your win, Andrea!! Have a good weekend (at the movies, perhaps?)
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Date: 2/17/2012 8:52:00 AM
It's a practical that there's no rose without a thorn means to safeguard itself. If without love and carelessly wants to pluck, Rose takes the revenge. It's call miracle, I think. Loved much for this wonderful one. Loved,bl
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Date: 2/17/2012 8:53:00 AM
Congrats for the win, loved, bl
Date: 2/17/2012 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem Andrea, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:18:00 PM
congrats Andrea on a magnificent win for this extraordinary write luv on trample.. wow..one..
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Date: 2/16/2012 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. The prettiest roses have the sharpest thorns. This is a very descriptive write.
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Date: 2/16/2012 8:46:00 PM
Enjoyed it first time around.Congrats Andrea on your win.
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Date: 2/16/2012 8:07:00 PM
Glad she let her thorns out and he got his come uppance. Congratulations on another big win Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/16/2012 8:07:00 PM
So happy to see you come in 2nd place Andrea. Congrats!
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:32:00 PM
LOL, I love this one. I bet many a man has trampled a rose and then felt her thorns! Hope you had a great Valentine's Day yesterday, my friend
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:07:00 AM
Loved your play on words Andrea. Very clever poem that is sure to do well in the contest.
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Date: 2/14/2012 7:57:00 PM
ooo... good one... good luck in the contest.... Have a happy valentine days... ~ :-) Always, * PD
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Date: 2/14/2012 4:14:00 PM
It's sad when a poor schmuck learns that lesson. He shouldn't have left her all alone and guessin'. But from my own experiance. I know too well, the other side of the fence.
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Date: 2/14/2012 3:07:00 PM
Happy Valentine's Day, Andrea. Just hopped on here for a few minutes to wish u a great day! Now,..back to insanity! Thanks for appreciating my poem about a lil girl missing her grandmother...that would be me, yes! Love and hugs on this EPIC day! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/14/2012 2:07:00 PM
luv where u took the trampled theme Andrea and perfected it into the rose .. elegant piece.. good luck in Paula's contest luv.. a winner ..
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Date: 2/14/2012 11:30:00 AM
What a great way to go about this contest...now his foot is forever bleeding as it is deserving so! I love your word play from many different phrases! I hope to never find about Alimony's sting, I don't want that thorn in my foot! This is an incredible poem my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/14/2012 9:17:00 AM
great ending to a very clever take on the "trample" theme. i like this one!
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Date: 2/14/2012 8:39:00 AM
Ohhhh I love this poem...there is no rose without a thorn.... priceless. Happy Valentines Andrea. I would enjoy those choc strawberries. Have an awesome day. Must get dressed for work as I have to leave in 20 min. ttyl love phyl
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