Remnants of Time

Black roses sprawl, to droop, then fade raking tendrils of her attic’s shades; a brief display which glints inked nights only for time’s sake, buds do parade. How fleeting the luster of stems’ arms, between weeping dusk and chilled sun twigs crack like love's farewell --sad moon, a wish-- the fragrance of bliss gone. She digs remnants; gazing afar perhaps to cuddle ringlets of star, that hides dawn’s lamp from memories instead her eyes reflect more scars. Though pain mocks unbecoming heart a young bough nestles on ground's arc; granting reprieve in place of tears to kindle sparks for dance to start. Open Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot 7/12/2015
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Martin Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Beautiful, Nette! Appreciate your imagery and expression!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 2:50 AM
Exquisite poetry nette! Congrats on ur awesome win dear friend!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:01 PM
I knew this would be at the top Nette. Big congrats on your win!
Nunez Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Congrats Nette! hugs :-)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Nette, do love some of the lines here and some phrases!!! splendid!! mabuhay!~Olive ELoisa =') ( still am here)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:04 AM
ringlets of stars is my fave phrase!!!
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 5:26 AM
WOW, NETTE.....a purely metaphoric delight...sweet sadness tinged with renewal. Wonderfully word painting.
Callus Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:39 AM
Lovely and creative; delightful imagery and several captivating phrases dressed in poetic attire! #7 Congratulations:) hugs // paul
Ryerson Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:35 AM
As Carly Simon famously sang: "Nobody does it better"...I gotta study this form which you have put to such elegant use my friend! Congratulation are DEFINITELY in order...
Wigley Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 8:20 PM
You do this so well, Nette, I'm in awe. Congratulations on this lovely verse . Viv x
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Congratulations on your win 7 Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Nette, congratulations in Charlotte Puddifootst... SKAT
Richards Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 6:03 PM
So beautiful sad, and only you could describe the scene in your unique, exquisite style. Congrats to you, Nette!
Puddifoot Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 2:50 PM
as always, beautiful language and imagery from you, nette, liked 'ringlets of star' particularly - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Such a touching poem Nette so beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Nette this is absolutely stunning! A7
Sabre Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 1:30 PM
Massive, intense! Only one who is fully in touch with her feelings can write this.
Onna Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 1:08 PM
I flipping loved this !Granting reprieve instead of tears! Brilliant poetry, held me throughout!
Peterson Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Astonishingly eloquent.
Nunez Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 3:45 AM
Gosh Nette. Such grace in every line. Even where it suggests heartbreak...I agree with Frederic. That line is a powerful metaphor. Gl with the contest. huggs
Parker Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 8:54 PM
twigs crack like love's farewell is such a powerfull line..I actually heard it..a beautiful poem my friend but that line I wish I had written..good luck in the contest
Konos Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:29 PM
That sounds more like Cloud 10.....wow...
Em Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Touching poem as it ends with a spark of renewal. And the flow of your words leave me wanting more!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Oh my Nette. I see another winner here. Your creative mind has no bounds! I love the intensive imagery your poem expresses! 7
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