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Reminiscing In Nostalgia

While happily we stroll the starlit night skies Sharing sweet memories in enchanting glee Cheering looks of life, gazing in grateful eyes Falling leaves reel, amber themes of lilting tree Sharing sweet memories in enchanting glee Blushing moonlit love charms nostalgic appeal Falling leaves reel, amber themes of lilting tree As we harken back, courting amorous zeal Blushing moonlit love charms nostalgic appeal Chirping sounds of birds enliven as they sing As we harken back, courting amorous zeal Gleaming lively past's visions of vibrant spring Chirping sounds of birds enliven as they sing When we visit our old home once in a while Gleaming lively past's visions of vibrant spring Engrossed in our yore, doting its loving smile When we visit our old home once in a while Sitting by your side, we traverse back in time Engrossed in our yore, doting its loving smile Chasing joy of life, in longings quite sublime Sitting by your side, we traverse back in time Cheering looks of life, gazing in grateful eyes Chasing joy of life, in longings quite sublime While happily we stroll the starlit night skies July 1, 2020 Placed 1st: Feelings of nostalgia poetry contest Eleven syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com) Sponsor: Eve Roper Photo # 2

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Joseph May

Date: 10/4/2023 6:53:00 AM

A romantic stroll down memory lane Vijay Very nicely penned

Valsa George

Date: 12/21/2021 11:21:00 PM

Here is nostalgia for a past which is over while staying fully content with what is now ! A fortunate pair to whom life has ever been a merry song. All the beautiful scenes and sounds of nature fill them with an exuberant delight now as before ! Enviable is the way their life is being presented....A difficult form of verse is safe with your facile pen!

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/14/2020 5:14:00 PM

Beautifully written and presented, Vijay. One day I may try to write a Pantoum :) ~Angie

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/27/2020 2:38:00 AM

This would be a nostalgia I'd like to live again and again under the moonlit sky wrapped in a starry blanket. Congratulations on your win for this adorable muse Vijay. You make me admire you more and more with your words each time dear friend. :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/26/2020 3:41:00 PM

I don't know how I missed this before, but wanted to give you (belated) congratulations, this is indeed a sublime song-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2020 3:49:00 PM

Lovely and romantic, Vijay. Big congrats in this pantoum contest.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2020 12:03:00 PM

Vijay, you expressed the deep romantic feelings of emotion by placing the reader in a beautiful scene. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/2/2020 9:21:00 PM

I am wrapping these moments gently around me. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. You create vivid images with your words. The mood lingers- softly. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/3/2020 3:42:00 PM

Always a joy to read your comments my friend--much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/2/2020 8:48:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and memories to cherish in your lyrical lines, Vijay! GL in the contest...I predict a winner. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/3/2020 3:42:00 PM

So very kind of you--much appreciate, Rhonda--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/2/2020 5:24:00 PM

Another lovely, descriptive blend of nature and romance, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/3/2020 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2020 1:53:00 PM

Uplifting and lovely imagery!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/2/2020 8:35:00 AM

Wow! A winner for me. So well expressed Vijay. I enjoyed this and felt every bit of it :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:05:00 PM

Thank you Heidi--so very kind of you--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/2/2020 7:20:00 AM

Magical romantic memories that beautify the soul and magnify love under the watchful eyes of the mesmerizing night my friend, Vijay! Outstanding poetic work! Good luck my dear friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:05:00 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate, as always, Demetrios.

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/2/2020 6:28:00 AM

you have woven the threads of romance with nature beautifully into this poem...I struggle with this form but you made it look like a breeze... wonderful penning Vijay, best wishes in the contest! hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:04:00 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate the kind feedback, Sandy--many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 7/2/2020 4:36:00 AM

The power to capture sweet memories, euphoric feelings in an enchanting setting and Nature music with an artistic flair for the highest level of beauty! An amazing work of Art, dear Vijay! A great poem deserving recognition and outshining placement! A great pleasure to read! Best regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:03:00 PM

Always a pleasure to read your comments--many thanks, Besma--much appreciate, as always. Regards.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/2/2020 3:27:00 AM

Absolutely love your poetic journey, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:03:00 PM

Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/2/2020 1:46:00 AM

Wow.. an enchanting glory of nostalgic write.. Beautiful like a soothing song.. Good luck Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:02:00 PM

Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/1/2020 5:05:00 PM

A form I struggle with Vijay but you've composed this brilliantly A sure winner in my book Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:02:00 PM

So very kind of you to say so--much appreciate, Tom--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/1/2020 1:10:00 PM

A wonderful pantoum Vijay and so perfectly executed, excellent poetry - best wishes for the contest, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2020 4:01:00 PM

Much appreciate Jennifer, your visit and kind remarks--many thanks, my friend.