Remembrance

In the distance sounds of happiness ring as a nighttime star guides so many home echoes of those times have slipped away leaving remembrance of our once last kiss Lips chapped and cracked lost a thousand years that honeysuckle taste of ecstasy has up and ran off and my memories are fading too I long for the days where heartbeats filled this soul where new days were an adventure and that good morning smile made me whole Life why have you stopped for me as I watch the others go why do you still torture me and leave me feeling low

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Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 3/31/2017 9:46:00 PM

I am at a loss for words Tim after reading this heartbreaking poem. I just hope you can find it in you or others to help you move on. Amitiés

Shubham Kamble

Date: 3/31/2017 2:17:00 PM

Heart touching depth... Wonderful write... :) shubham

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/31/2017 12:30:00 PM

Dear Tim. Poetry is heart and soul not to mention emotions. This one entry has it all. The reader feels the deep passion and feelings within because your expression is vivid and clear. I'm sorry if life is dark at this time. No one of us is exempt from stress loss or darkness. Believe me, I could write all day of loss if I chose to but.... If only I could figure out the path of moving on. If we could all figure out that path. Have a wonderful afternoon. Darkness always inspires poetry.

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/31/2017 12:22:00 PM

gutwrenching Tim :-) To every ending there is a beginning. hope for the new and all that possible. A devastating sad write that conveys the emotions with tremendous heart. Lovely writing. blessings xxx

Darren White

Date: 3/31/2017 9:01:00 AM

I am sorry about that Tim... and I wish I could do something about this.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2017 8:48:00 AM

- This makes me cry, Tim ... heartbreaking poem, lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Ella

Date: 3/31/2017 8:43:00 AM

(((Tim))) You reach the heart with your poem as so many of yours do.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/31/2017 8:37:00 AM

Sadly life changes..the world changes...people change too...Its heartwrenching when one heart of two stops beating deeply..but Tim It would be the end of the world only if we let it.Focus on the beautiful kids you have in life...friends...people who care.Things you are blessed with..and smile.Life didnt stop yet..it changed..It brought new challenges..and Im sure one day youfeel so good again.Im touched.

Chris Green

Date: 3/31/2017 7:31:00 AM

Some memories make us smile and some the opposite, but my friend, the fact that you actually felt that kiss, that it is a memory and not merely a dream is a good thing, no matter the sorrow that comes now. Deeply sad Tim.

White Wolf

Date: 3/31/2017 7:20:00 AM

That's such a sad write, Tim! Here's to better days mate.