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Remembering With Smiles

a charonnet II smiled when I thought of my aunt. Smooth as velvet, Aunt Anne spoke silk. She was my secret confidant; her kind heart was cream atop milk. We both were born in the same year why mom died at my birth – unclear. Two girls grew up at Anne’s mother’s with five guys, uncles and brothers. When I thought of my aunt, I smiled Aunt Anne spoke silk, smooth as velvet. My confidant she was - hush-hush. Cream atop milk, her heart was kind. With five boys we hit, spit and bit; Lone sisters ruled; two souls were knit. September 9, 2020 Charles Messina's contest: Charonnet Poetry Contest Starting line: "I smiled when..." rhyme scheme (ABAB, CCDD, EFGH, II) 8 syllables in each line, no more or less. This is a form Charles Messina created. In the last "stanza" NOT the couplet. You must re-arrange the words in lines AB & AB in the first stanza. *See my example in my latest poem "Ninety-Nine Years" In addition, you can only use (8) syllables in each line, no more or less.

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Date: 10/13/2020 10:05:00 AM
your poem made me smile Reason, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2020 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, I appreciate the comment and applause.
Date: 10/13/2020 6:44:00 AM
Reason, I really enjoyed this poem. Unfortunately the format was a little off. Thanks for entering my contest and congratulations on your placement. Hope all is well. Charlie
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Date: 10/13/2020 7:07:00 PM
I'm notorious for that; I've done repairs on the syllable count. Thanks for the placement regardless; it shows your generous forgiving nature. All is well on the Indiana side of the Ohio.
Date: 9/29/2020 9:50:00 PM
I hope she see's this sweet poem. I'm sure it will bless her heart. A beautiful tribute to you aunt.
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Date: 10/5/2020 3:48:00 AM
Thanks BJ, it is mostly made up; but has a basis in fact. Appreciate your thoughts very much.

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