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Remembering the Glory Days

To lie in all my golden glory, My former branch left bare; I remember my crisp and fresh green unfolding Into delighting you, serving you, With my shade and perfume. And through the black green year of blue shadow, And devotion when you loved my doing as you bid. Before heartlessly you let go and I spiraled Drifting, drifting, landing and now I lie here in all my golden glory, Longing for those useful days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/19/2017 3:43:00 AM
Parade of poetic expressions that beautifies further your superb writing dear, S.W!
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Date: 11/18/2017 6:33:00 AM
Wow! "the black green year of black shadow" - excellent line, Sunlite:)
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Date: 11/17/2017 1:55:00 PM
Sun, so many lovely lines beautifully penned, I like the line, "I remember my crisp and fresh green unfolding"~
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Date: 11/17/2017 12:58:00 AM
This is lovely, Sunlite, and I agree with Teppo on that line, wonderfully put. Viv x
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Date: 11/15/2017 12:13:00 PM
How I feel right about now. A fabulous poem Sunlite... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 9:10:00 AM
A poetic treat eloquently expressed.
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Date: 11/14/2017 8:36:00 PM
wow that's good....Seren
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Date: 11/14/2017 7:32:00 PM
A very beautiful way to express these emotions, beautiful poem!
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