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I enter the gates rusty and old- worn with age a resting place that fills my heart with sorrow barren trees hang low and withered flowers lay forlorn a cold grey sky hovers above and the wind takes my flowing hair oh, I am remembering, remembering though the drums of time have rolled on leaving a scar on the map of my soul hidden birds are singing sad music that drifts a gravel path takes me deep into the labyrinth maze where crumbling old markers erode with time and I am lost in a sea of nameless death some markers are simple crosses (unreadable) others stone engraved I cross the little bridge where a quiet icy stream ripples still - I remember, remember deep valleys of pristine snow lay before me beautiful- until I notice the toppled statues decaying this scene holds a place in my life I want to forget it- to leave it behind but I cannot then- I am standing at the grave of my sweet beloved Snowball cat . . . buried in childhood as my eyes swell with a sea of tears and dark clouds sail across the sky- _____________________________ October 1, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/Remembering Copyright Protected, ID 18-1066-258-18 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Remembering What We Want To Forget sponsor, Kim Rodrigues Second Place

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Date: 10/16/2018 6:35:00 AM
It is so sad to lose a pet especially one that has become such an intimate part of our lives. We lost a cat like this to coyotes a couple years ago. I could feel the pain and sadness that you still feel, Constance. Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 10/15/2018 2:37:00 PM
Dear Heart, congratulations on your win. Great imagery and so sad, but always well written.
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Date: 10/15/2018 2:23:00 PM
Hi BW, Our beloved pets are family. I cried my eyes out when big red my beloved died. Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest- Alexis
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Date: 10/15/2018 1:18:00 PM
So much leads us to the resting place of your beloved snowball cat! Like walking out the memories. Congratulations on your second place win, Constance!
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Date: 10/1/2018 4:28:00 PM
Snowball was my very first cat, a pure white kitten that came in a Christmas stocking, I recall how dad was trying to keep her there. I loved her so much, she had two litters of kittens pure white like her before she was "fixed". She was hit by a car when she ran across the street to meet us coming home from school. We were all devastated and I talked my dad into burying her in a pet cemetery. Mom had said NO MORE cats but about a month later we got Marmalade . . . an orange tabby.
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