Remember Jacob

REMEMBER JACOB

what is normal?
i’m back to it
with my back
to the negativity
a smile securely
in place, in place of
the fog that was raging,
raging strong…
fighting me (how
do you fight an entity -
you cannot see).
i pray, i pray
through day and night
night and day.
remember Jacob
wrestled
even with God -
he wanted a blessing.
a blessing i’ll take
but the enemy i leave
behind.
the enemy is often lurking
in my mind, propelled
by memories
that are touched upon
or by things
i shouldn’t see or hear.
we live in a fallen world
a world of turbulence.
even i, have trouble sorting it out.
i sure feel for those who are caught
in an unholy squeeze. sneeze
it out…bring it to your knees…
shout it out
with every ounce of grateful
thing you can think about.
turnabout is fair play -
play unfair with unholiness
cling to godliness. even if
we suffer dislocation, like Jacob,
our disorientation all gone -
the sun with its warmth
of healing touch.

3/27/2023

Jacob was left alone, and a man wrestled with him until daybreak…”Your name will no longer be Jacob. It will be Israel because you have struggled with God and with men and have prevailed.”… The sun shone on him (Jacob) as he passed by Penuel — limping because of his hip. (From Genesis 32:24-30)
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Bell Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:42 AM
I've never been religious, but I quite like others being religious for me. Jacob persevered, and in life, that's all you can do.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:55 AM
A relationship with the Lord is better than religious. I search his word, ponder, pray and so so many times through a sermon, a friend, and other sources Jesus answers. Thank you for reading, Paul!
George Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Wrestling with God for a blessing .... I like that idea. I missed seeing this as POEM of the DAY. This is simply beautiful. Belated Congratulations Kim on yoyr well deserved honor.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:56 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa!
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 4:12 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD. Way to go. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Parker Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Clinging...POTD indeed, KR. ~;o]
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Yes, Arlo! Thank you!
Nicole Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:46 PM
"Cling to godliness. even if we suffer dislocation, like Jacob." I completely agree. Your thoughts are beautiful, uplifting and filled with so much truth. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Thank you, Brandy! Hugs ~ Kim
Rolland Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:29 PM
beautiful, a poem who bring serenity and grace, thanks yann
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Thank you! Love brings serenity and grace!
Baker Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Kim! Great story put into poetry for us to learn from and enjoy. Enjoy your special day! Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Thank you so much, Bill!
McBride  Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations on POTD, very inspiring and encouraging poem, love it,. May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much! I just came back from visiting in Arizona! Uplifting! God bless you, Stephan!
May Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Congrats on POTD Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Kitchin Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:52 PM
Kim, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Thank you, Tania!
Messina Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 12:07 PM
A beautiful write, Kim. Congratulations on POTD! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Thank you, Charles!
Gorelick Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Superb Kim, congratulations on POTD! Disturbing yet insightful, let us try to be holy and listen to our better angels no matter the trials and bitter tribulations of which we are all subject to. I found your verse to be a wake call to follow the honorable and sacred path. Robert
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Yes! Thank you, Robert! It is a delightful path that leads to eternity. God bless!
Chuuk Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 8:23 AM
An inspirational write, Kim. And big congrats on potd. God bless. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Thank you, Fin!
Anaya Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Amen to that! Congratulations on the POTD Kim Rodrigues! Beautiful poem & Perfect for Lent: Lent begins 46 days before the Saturday of Easter weekend (Easter Sunday falls on Sunday, April 9, 2023) Hugs & Blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:03 AM
Hugs and blessings, dear Anaya! Jesus birth, life, death and resurrection significant every day and we celebrate to stir us up and remind us. God bless!
Romios Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:40 AM
So filled with gladness , to see you win, excellent message, Love and Congratulations. You spiritual poetess.. POTD bessings! Love, Pangie xo
Romios Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Yes and a horrible poet, I am. Ready to leave PS PR
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:03 AM
You are such a cheerleader and very much appreciated! God bless you, Pangie! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write. Love It. Have a great/blessed day writing away................
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Thank you as always, dear one!
La France Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Kim, excellent writing, fantastic poem and congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Wolf Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:05 AM
'the healing touch!' -- worked for Jacob; works for me! Congratulations, Kim, on POTD! Sunshine and Joy, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Amen and Amen! Thank you most kindly, Gershon!
Fowler Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Terrific Kim. Congratulations on POTD! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Wonderful, Kim for your POTD. You deserve it.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Aww…thank you, my friend!
Pandit Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 5:42 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Kim. Thank you for the context in your footnote. Enjoy your day.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Sands Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 4:45 AM
Excellent poem Kim. Congratulations for POTD! Enjoy :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Turner Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 4:28 AM
Congratulations on POTD Kim. A very inspirational write.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Thank you, Daniel!
Gentile Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Kim, congratulations on your POTD honors! Enjoy your day xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Back from vacation! Thank you, dear one!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 1:47 AM
A well deserved honour of poem of the day Kim, we all have our wrestles within, till we see the Light and give in… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:52 AM
We do, indeed! Thank you, Belle!
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