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First breaths are harder these days
eventhough I seem to be rising well
before you peek your head, my sun

my walk a little slower these days
with each step I can feel the pain
my wounds they have healed but
inside scars just won't fade away

where have you gone to, my friends 
I can barely make out your call
is it in the winds you have blown
and can't find your way back home

where have you gone, my love
I only see shadows dancing at dawn
is it here where you pleasantly roam
amongst the flowers and dear fawn

oh where have I gone to, this time ??
I can't seem to even remember 
my name

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/31/2017 7:17:00 PM
Time will heal both scars I'm sure Tim.
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Date: 10/28/2017 1:42:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Tim. Wish the pain would go away for you <3 Love this one :)
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Date: 10/28/2017 9:41:00 AM
So heartfelt ,Tim, good write Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/27/2017 11:40:00 AM
I come home today... and now reading this beautiful but sad poem of yours, my friend. But honestly, it is a great poem. Fav!
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Date: 10/27/2017 9:58:00 AM
Alzheimers? Reminds me of anyway. Powerful, sad and Triple Wowsa ~ john
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Date: 10/26/2017 9:42:00 PM
This is so sad :(
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Date: 10/26/2017 7:43:00 PM
Wow, Tim! This one hits home! Outstanding (as usual)
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:26:00 PM
Tim, this is a great poem. It reads so smoothly. I have to admit, I have felt this same way at times.
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Date: 10/26/2017 3:56:00 PM
I think if there was a boat of poets with these feelings, we'd be sailing in it.In fact it would probably sink from being over crowded. Great poem and a fav.
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Date: 10/26/2017 3:15:00 PM
Tim these words are so apt to many people including me....lovely write....Seren
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:01:00 PM
This is an excellent poem--a joy to read--well done Tim!
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Date: 10/26/2017 1:30:00 PM
I, myself wonder the same questions...Knowing I came alone...without a name
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Date: 10/26/2017 11:39:00 AM
- This gives me a sad feeling, Tim - Beautifully written - (Sorry I have not been to "soup" the last two weeks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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