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Refugees

From the dark arenas of violence, from the shackles of oppression, from a land reeking of the smell of blood, they flee bloodied and bruised. these scraps of humanity, alienated from their moorings, have no possessions other than the sky above and some inches of land to curl up that they carry with them as they move. before them gapes an abyss of emptiness, disturbing them like existential absurdity. they differ, speaking disparate tongues, like those heard in the tower of Babel. but they have a single identity. they are all REFUGEES, driven by war. they have a single destination, a promised land of nowhere! ………………………………………… Nov.19.2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/20/2022 7:49:00 AM
For some reason I cannot open your soup mail. It shows an eye and only your name, not sure if I'm blocked or not, also you don't have a mailbox showing so I cannot send you a soup mail either lol, can you check to see if I am accidentally blocked, so I can reply to your soup mail, not ignoring you just can't open it, Vie
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Valsa George
Date: 11/20/2022 6:33:00 PM
Thanks for your kind response, dear Rose. My soupmail is often non-functional. It always gives me wrong notifications when there are no soup mails at all. So far I haven't blocked you or anybody. When I posted my poem a second time, I could enter it in the contest. But I have retained my first posting as it has all the comments.
Date: 11/20/2022 1:53:00 AM
In Malta, we know a lot about refugees. Many die to drown.
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Date: 11/19/2022 5:51:00 PM
I am grateful to you for writing about refugees not just from war, but from corrupted governments. They come here for help and are turned away from selfish men who build walls and claim they are Christians, shameful. Thank you Valsa
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Date: 11/19/2022 10:52:00 AM
Valsa, you deserve a lot of praise for bringing attention to their plight. Perhaps all of humanity is taking note. There appears to be no way to obtain relief from this situation.
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Date: 11/19/2022 10:31:00 AM
I hope all can put yourself in there life, we complain so much over here , and so many have it so easy, may God bring them peace and joy , Paul in the Bible faced death daily from this wicked generation , in these bad times I pray they cry out and seek God and receive His spirit and blessings, for so many that have it easy will never seek
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Date: 11/19/2022 7:39:00 AM
Wow! Very well sad in its sadness!
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Date: 11/19/2022 7:05:00 AM
Unfortunately, there's no end in sight granting relief. Kudos to you for highlighting their cause. May be the world is listening. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 11/19/2022 5:51:00 AM
To turn away those in real need of help is a terrible flaw in the human nature of those who are greedy and selfish. You’ve made good points in your lines, Valsa.
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Date: 11/19/2022 5:01:00 AM
You captured the plight of the refugees well Valsa, why is it that many countries see them as a problem, they are human beings escaping the horrors and violence of war, they don't want to be in another country far from their homes. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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