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Reflections of Life

The morning mirror shows my aging eyes; a dim reflection of what used to be. With woeful trepidation I surmise that I’m approaching final destiny. As time’s relentless ticking marches by, I start to think about that fateful day; my presence here will bid a fond goodbye, but will my memory be here to stay. Will future generations know my name, or will I be someone that time forgot; I worry, did I live without acclaim, and then I’m tempered by this final thought… long past the day these weary bones have gone, my humble poetry will still live on. September 19, 2019

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Date: 10/2/2019 3:32:00 AM
Your beautiful words will live on, congratulations John :-) x
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/2/2019 6:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 9/26/2019 4:35:00 PM
John congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/27/2019 4:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, I appreciate your comments and support. Hugs, John
Date: 9/26/2019 12:50:00 PM
You will always be remembered my dear friend!and you are not old!;) congrats on your win!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/26/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend, I appreciate you. Hugs
Date: 9/26/2019 8:25:00 AM
- Congratulations :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/26/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/22/2019 8:24:00 AM
- Many thoughts ... even if I brush and use the perfect soap on the mirror ... I will never be young again ... a wonderful poem that will live forever, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/22/2019 4:53:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 9/20/2019 10:52:00 AM
Hopefully we all have a long while yet to enjoy each others poetry and comments and replies. Death is inevitable, but life is short, so let us enjoy what we have left and encourage each other forward. Intense and beautiful write John, so well penned. Hug and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/21/2019 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Jenn, I do always enjoy hearing your thoughts and comments, your take on my musings. Yes let’s hope we have many more years of reading each other’s work and sharing our thoughts. Have a beautiful weekend my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 9/20/2019 10:04:00 AM
Yes it's an age old question, but I guess if we've done some good we will be remembered. I understand what you mean, I'm slowly not recognizing myself and the mirror tells the truth, sadly. Your beautiful words John, will be remembered without a doubt!
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/20/2019 5:38:00 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate your thoughts and comments and the kind words.
Date: 9/19/2019 9:16:00 PM
sadly poets become more famous it seems after they've passed ...i don't think you have a thing to worry about, you aren't going anywhere yet...beautiful sonnet btw :) hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/20/2019 4:29:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Sandy. I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 9/19/2019 5:50:00 PM
The soul of a poet lives on and our eyes might look tired in the mirror but when they smile at life there is a beauty that nothing can outshine.....especially a lovely glass of wine. Enjoyed this beautifully expressed introspection. SuZ
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/19/2019 9:12:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Suz, and save a glass of that lovely wine for me. Hugs, John
Date: 9/19/2019 1:54:00 PM
Yes, there is that consolation. Our words live on, especially our poetic words. Blessings, John (And here's to sticking around for a while). ~ Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/19/2019 2:02:00 PM
Here, here...I'll drink to that! Thanks, Gershon, I appreciate your thoughts. John
Date: 9/19/2019 12:42:00 PM
Time moves along, and we move with it. Age likes to follow.. (If only we could stay Young) However, in these moments and minutes- memories made. Life is worth the living. "Will future generations know my name?" Yes!! They will my dear friend. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/19/2019 2:07:00 PM
Thank you, B, I always look forward to hearing your thoughts and comments. It's nice to know that you won't forget my name. :) Hugs, John

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