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Red Sky

I've heard, “Red skies at morning, Sailors take warning," - hogwash. My words to rising red skies YOU threaten MY day? Your spell does not block my hope, you are not a weatherman, you wait and see, Mr. Sky, clear, blue skies by noon. written June 20, 2013 contest: A DoDo kind of day by Francine Roberts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/25/2013 2:33:00 PM
......... congrats *****SKAT
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Date: 7/24/2013 7:59:00 PM
Yes...no sailor take warning!!!!! Haha.congratulations... loved it...
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Date: 7/23/2013 6:16:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Reason
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Date: 7/23/2013 6:11:00 PM
I like the bold statement challenging the sun. Great take on the theme. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/23/2013 12:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/24/2013 7:10:00 PM
That's tellin' him... Now break out your sunscreen. Nice one Reason.... Jake
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Date: 6/24/2013 2:43:00 AM
Well done Reason on this unique Dodoitsu. A great contender in the contest. Good luck
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Date: 6/23/2013 12:29:00 AM
also uniquely done. REally like this one.
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Date: 6/20/2013 11:47:00 PM
Looks like a contender for Russell's contest.
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