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Sea Sanguine Surprises Australians. A rare phenomena caused by algae (This actually happened on Bondi Beach in 2012 when the water turned scarlet) Contest: language of water Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Jan Allison Tasman sea – Australia 7th December 2015

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Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 9:39:00 PM

JAN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2015 1:09:00 AM

Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/11/2015 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations! CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 12/11/2015 8:56:00 AM

Thanks my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/11/2015 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/10/2015 10:58:00 PM

Congrats on wonderful write n win Jan! A unique take.. informative too.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/11/2015 1:06:00 AM

Thanks DR Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 12/10/2015 8:11:00 PM

how interesting...and a little creepy...congrats Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 12/11/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thanks David:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2015 11:06:00 AM

I hate coming back to visit empty handed, Jan...so I brought you Congratulations!:)!:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2015 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Paul:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman

Date: 12/10/2015 8:11:00 AM

Curious phenomenon isn't it? Nice, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2015 9:48:00 AM

Very - would be fascinating to have seen it:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 12/10/2015 6:20:00 AM

Great info to share and congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2015 6:51:00 AM

Thanks Michael:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/10/2015 4:25:00 AM

a different take on the theme, jan... nice!..sweet congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2015 6:51:00 AM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2015 8:48:00 PM

this is a very interesting way to do the contest, Jan. And I did not know about this.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2015 2:06:00 AM

Not sure if it's what Nette is after - you know me for thinking outside the box lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/9/2015 5:51:00 AM

i heard of this, it must've been a spectacular sight...good tetractys here with effective alliteration, i would think a strong contender - good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/9/2015 6:18:00 AM

Thanks Charlotte I always appreciate your feedback:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/8/2015 6:30:00 PM

Have you ever read The Yellow River written by I.P. Nightly? I was not aware of the natural phenomenon that turned the water scarlet. Great poem as it also teaches as well as entertains.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/9/2015 1:20:00 AM

ha ha ha that is hilarious :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2015 4:40:00 PM

A lovely tetractys that at first had me think of the more renowned Red Sea. Attracted by the alliterative 's'. gl in contest. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Paul I'm not sure if it is what Nette is after but i have to go with my muse:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/8/2015 4:12:00 PM

This happens here also. I saw it only once when I was in my teens. A favorite clamming area had to be closed off. I am split in my sentiments for the queen of England, though I lean more to her dedication more than anything. Hope my British Soupers do not take offense. Thanks for the stop by, and success in the contest. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 4:13:00 PM

Oh how fascinating you observed this Maurice - as for our Queen long may she reign:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/8/2015 12:54:00 PM

Your entry will come in at the top I predict Jan. It is superb! I watched how this happens on a documentry.#7

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 1:16:00 PM

Oh Connie that must have been fascinating - I read an article about it and this poem appeared as if by magic:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 12/8/2015 12:27:00 PM

So love the phenomenon moments on this wonderful planet. You've captured this one splendidly Jan. Good luck in the contest ~~ hugs//James ~~ xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 1:15:00 PM

Thanks James for your friendship and continued support:-) hugs jan xx

David Meade

Date: 12/8/2015 8:49:00 AM

Creation and your poems never ceases to amaze me -- well done dear Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 1:14:00 PM

Aww thanks David I am not sure what Nette will make of my 'take on the theme' but i go with the flow of my pen:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/8/2015 5:58:00 AM

I wonder what happened to the creatures of the sea.. nice one Jan.. =`) hugs! ~Olive ELoisa

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 7:49:00 AM

I have no idea how they cleared this algae - must have been fascinating to see the sea bright red! :-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 12/7/2015 7:32:00 PM

...I told the angels painting the sunset to be careful not to spill any......I read about this and the pictures you posted make the poem come alive.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 1:13:00 AM

Thanks John - not sure if its what Nette is after but it makes an interesting poem:-) hugs jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 12/7/2015 4:36:00 PM

Very nice Jan! How unusual! Should do well in contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 4:40:00 PM

I'm not sure if it's what Nette is after but I have to go with the flow of my pen:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/7/2015 4:13:00 PM

Very nice, Jan and such an unusual circumstance to image with your Tetractys. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 4:22:00 PM

I'm not sure if it's what Nette is after but I have to go with my muse - :-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 12/7/2015 3:53:00 PM

Looks like blood...no swimming for me

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 3:55:00 PM

It must have been a spectacular sight Tim! Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/7/2015 1:36:00 PM

Creative poem and interesting story!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:42:00 PM

Thanks Arthur - have gone out on a limb here for the contest - sometimes it pays off other times not but there are always the screwed contests for my growing collection of N/A's lol:-) hugs Jan x