Rear View Air

As soon as we got to the county fair
The country odor got through my nose hair
Coz above some milk pails
We encountered cow tails
Which filled our senses with their dairy-air

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Date: 10/26/2023 11:47:00 AM
Funny David like it hahaha Dairy good
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Date: 10/25/2023 1:50:00 PM
A funny limerick I'm following for more.
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Date: 10/19/2023 4:01:00 AM
Oh this is a funny one! Can picture the cow tails waving their O-dare! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/4/2023 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A fun Limerick  write. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 10/4/2023 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 10/4/2023 12:03:00 AM
Adorable. Love it - Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 10/3/2023 11:16:00 PM
Enjoyed the word play dairy-air funny that, well done
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Date: 10/3/2023 8:48:00 PM
Hahahaha. Congrats on a funny potd!
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Date: 10/3/2023 7:55:00 PM
Lol… Congratulations on POTD, David :)
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Date: 10/3/2023 6:13:00 PM
Lovely Limerick, enjoyed this. Congrats on POTD! -AG
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Date: 10/3/2023 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honour, David, Limericks are fun!
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Date: 10/3/2023 5:13:00 PM
Belated Congrats, David, This brings me joy to see you win! If I lived near you, I’d treat you to your favorite coffee! Keep writing, my friend, Pangie xxx
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Date: 10/3/2023 2:38:00 PM
A clever and funny Limerick, David: Yes I have smelled that dairy- air in my younger days when I-took a summer job on a dairy farm. Congratulations on POTD. SuZ
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:46:00 PM
Thanks Suzanne, it must have been fun connecting with the farm life back in the day! Now we just have chickens to write about at home.
Date: 10/3/2023 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, David. An excellent and entertaining Limerick, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:44:00 PM
Thanks Bill for the comment, and yes, it is a special feeling.
Date: 10/3/2023 8:16:00 AM
No wonder I stay away from the fair. Congratulations on POTD
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:43:00 PM
Lol, yes Eve, that's a good reason. Thanks much.
Date: 10/3/2023 7:56:00 AM
David, back to congratulate you on POTD, a great limerick!
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Date: 10/3/2023 7:01:00 AM
Clever word play with the end line David, Congrats on POTD
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:43:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, and am grateful that the lines sometimes write themselves.
Date: 10/3/2023 6:50:00 AM
Fun ! Such a scene you create in a few words ! Congratulations on POTD David ! Susan :)
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:41:00 PM
Thanks Susan, I'm grateful for the Limerick and it's brevity sometimes.
Date: 10/3/2023 6:42:00 AM
David, coregulations on POTD~ Warren
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thanks Warren, appreciate the visit.
Date: 10/3/2023 6:35:00 AM
LOL. I laugh and laugh and laugh David. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:39:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment Linda. Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 10/3/2023 5:57:00 AM
David, you've bounced off of your derriere to land on your feet with POTD. Congrats, Gershon
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Date: 10/3/2023 5:44:00 AM
Great limerick, David! Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved.
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:18:00 PM
Thanks so much for the kind works, indeed!
Date: 10/3/2023 5:39:00 AM
Giggles Galore! Hilarious limerick, congratulations on POTD David, enjoy the day! xomo
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:17:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, I'm glad you can laugh along with it!
Date: 10/3/2023 3:01:00 AM
This is hilarious, David. Congratulations on POTD!
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:14:00 PM
Happy that you enjoyed, Charles, and thank you.
Date: 10/3/2023 1:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your dairy air…. I mean the bovine’s rear end being chosen poem of the day, David.
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