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Rear View Air

As soon as we got to the county fair
The country odor got through my nose hair
Coz above some milk pails
We encountered cow tails
Which filled our senses with their dairy-air

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Christopher Flaherty

October 26, 2023 at 11:47 AM

Funny David like it hahaha Dairy good

Hilda Greenhough

October 25, 2023 at 1:50 PM

A funny limerick I'm following for more.

Kim Rodrigues

October 19, 2023 at 4:01 AM

Oh this is a funny one! Can picture the cow tails waving their O-dare! Congratulations on POTD!

Paula Goldsmith

October 4, 2023 at 8:38 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A fun Limerick write. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Daisy Meadows

October 4, 2023 at 12:12 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Regina Mcintosh

October 4, 2023 at 12:03 AM

Adorable. Love it - Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina

Clive Culverhouse

October 3, 2023 at 11:16 PM

Enjoyed the word play dairy-air funny that, well done

Karen Jones

October 3, 2023 at 8:48 PM

Hahahaha. Congrats on a funny potd!

Akkina Downing

October 3, 2023 at 7:55 PM

Lol… Congratulations on POTD, David :)

Arastu Goyal

October 3, 2023 at 6:13 PM

Lovely Limerick, enjoyed this. Congrats on POTD! -AG

Malabika Ray Choudhury

October 3, 2023 at 5:29 PM

Congratulations on your POTD honour, David, Limericks are fun!

Panagiota Romios

October 3, 2023 at 5:13 PM

Belated Congrats, David, This brings me joy to see you win! If I lived near you, I’d treat you to your favorite coffee! Keep writing, my friend, Pangie xxx

Suzanne Delaney

October 3, 2023 at 2:38 PM

A clever and funny Limerick, David: Yes I have smelled that dairy- air in my younger days when I-took a summer job on a dairy farm. Congratulations on POTD. SuZ

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:46 PM

Thanks Suzanne, it must have been fun connecting with the farm life back in the day! Now we just have chickens to write about at home.

Bill Baker

October 3, 2023 at 12:27 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, David. An excellent and entertaining Limerick, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:44 PM

Thanks Bill for the comment, and yes, it is a special feeling.

Eve Roper

October 3, 2023 at 8:16 AM

No wonder I stay away from the fair. Congratulations on POTD

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:43 PM

Lol, yes Eve, that's a good reason. Thanks much.

Tania Kitchin

October 3, 2023 at 7:56 AM

David, back to congratulate you on POTD, a great limerick!

Joseph May

October 3, 2023 at 7:01 AM

Clever word play with the end line David, Congrats on POTD

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:43 PM

Thanks for the kind words, and am grateful that the lines sometimes write themselves.

Susan Lawrence

October 3, 2023 at 6:50 AM

Fun ! Such a scene you create in a few words ! Congratulations on POTD David ! Susan :)

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:41 PM

Thanks Susan, I'm grateful for the Limerick and it's brevity sometimes.

Warren Doll

October 3, 2023 at 6:42 AM

David, coregulations on POTD~ Warren

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:40 PM

Thanks Warren, appreciate the visit.

Linda Alice Fowler

October 3, 2023 at 6:35 AM

LOL. I laugh and laugh and laugh David. Congratulations on POTD! :)

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:39 PM

Thanks so much for your comment Linda. Glad you enjoyed!

Gershon Wolf

October 3, 2023 at 5:57 AM

David, you've bounced off of your derriere to land on your feet with POTD. Congrats, Gershon

Daniel Turner

October 3, 2023 at 5:44 AM

Great limerick, David! Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved.

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:18 PM

Thanks so much for the kind works, indeed!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 3, 2023 at 5:39 AM

Giggles Galore! Hilarious limerick, congratulations on POTD David, enjoy the day! xomo

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:17 PM

Thanks Maureen, I'm glad you can laugh along with it!

Charles Messina

October 3, 2023 at 3:01 AM

This is hilarious, David. Congratulations on POTD!

David Fisher

October 3, 2023 at 4:14 PM

Happy that you enjoyed, Charles, and thank you.

Lin Lane

October 3, 2023 at 1:36 AM

Congratulations on your dairy air…. I mean the bovine’s rear end being chosen poem of the day, David.

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