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Rear View Air

As soon as we got to the county fair The country odor got through my nose hair Coz above some milk pails We encountered cow tails Which filled our senses with their dairy-air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/26/2023 11:47:00 AM
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Funny David like it hahaha Dairy good
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/25/2023 1:50:00 PM
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A funny limerick I'm following for more.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2023 4:01:00 AM
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Oh this is a funny one! Can picture the cow tails waving their O-dare! Congratulations on POTD!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/4/2023 8:38:00 AM
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Congratulations on your POTD win. A fun Limerick  write. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 10/4/2023 12:12:00 AM
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Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/4/2023 12:03:00 AM
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Adorable. Love it - Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/3/2023 11:16:00 PM
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Enjoyed the word play dairy-air funny that, well done
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/3/2023 8:48:00 PM
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Hahahaha. Congrats on a funny potd!
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Akkina Downing
Date: 10/3/2023 7:55:00 PM
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Lol… Congratulations on POTD, David :)
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/3/2023 6:13:00 PM
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Lovely Limerick, enjoyed this. Congrats on POTD! -AG
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/3/2023 5:29:00 PM
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Congratulations on your POTD honour, David, Limericks are fun!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/3/2023 5:13:00 PM
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Belated Congrats, David, This brings me joy to see you win! If I lived near you, I’d treat you to your favorite coffee! Keep writing, my friend, Pangie xxx
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/3/2023 2:38:00 PM
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A clever and funny Limerick, David: Yes I have smelled that dairy- air in my younger days when I-took a summer job on a dairy farm. Congratulations on POTD. SuZ
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:46:00 PM
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Thanks Suzanne, it must have been fun connecting with the farm life back in the day! Now we just have chickens to write about at home.
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Bill Baker
Date: 10/3/2023 12:27:00 PM
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Congratulations on your POTD, David. An excellent and entertaining Limerick, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:44:00 PM
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Thanks Bill for the comment, and yes, it is a special feeling.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/3/2023 8:16:00 AM
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No wonder I stay away from the fair. Congratulations on POTD
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:43:00 PM
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Lol, yes Eve, that's a good reason. Thanks much.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/3/2023 7:56:00 AM
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David, back to congratulate you on POTD, a great limerick!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/3/2023 7:01:00 AM
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Clever word play with the end line David, Congrats on POTD
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:43:00 PM
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Thanks for the kind words, and am grateful that the lines sometimes write themselves.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/3/2023 6:50:00 AM
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Fun ! Such a scene you create in a few words ! Congratulations on POTD David ! Susan :)
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:41:00 PM
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Thanks Susan, I'm grateful for the Limerick and it's brevity sometimes.
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Warren Doll
Date: 10/3/2023 6:42:00 AM
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David, coregulations on POTD~ Warren
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:40:00 PM
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Thanks Warren, appreciate the visit.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/3/2023 6:35:00 AM
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LOL. I laugh and laugh and laugh David. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:39:00 PM
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Thanks so much for your comment Linda. Glad you enjoyed!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2023 5:57:00 AM
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David, you've bounced off of your derriere to land on your feet with POTD. Congrats, Gershon
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/3/2023 5:44:00 AM
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Great limerick, David! Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved.
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:18:00 PM
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Thanks so much for the kind works, indeed!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/3/2023 5:39:00 AM
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Giggles Galore! Hilarious limerick, congratulations on POTD David, enjoy the day! xomo
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:17:00 PM
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Thanks Maureen, I'm glad you can laugh along with it!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/3/2023 3:41:00 AM
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clever limerick...congrats on POTD
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:16:00 PM
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Thanks for the comment! Fortunately clever sneaks into our poems once in a while.
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/3/2023 3:01:00 AM
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This is hilarious, David. Congratulations on POTD!
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David Fisher
Date: 10/3/2023 4:14:00 PM
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Happy that you enjoyed, Charles, and thank you.
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