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Raven Calls

Death calls in the mist
Carnal clouds gather above....
In flight soaring high
Guardians of the dark side
To enhance her arousal.

© Harry J Horsman  2011

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Andrea Dietrich

October 3, 2012 at 2:39 PM

thank goodness I finally found one. Harry, I am not happy at ALL with this new change at Soup. I think the staff does not care about folks like me , who like to see older poems of friends. they have made it very difficult for me to move easily thru your back poems. I have to go back to your first page and keep clicking on the older page where I last saw a poem since I cannot use the backwards arrow. why the heck do some of the Soupers think this is "improvement"?? Are they crazy???

Andrea Dietrich

October 3, 2012 at 2:39 PM

And btw, this was a very interesting poem from you. Carnal clouds, very original!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 24, 2011 at 12:07 PM

I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Harry. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

February 19, 2011 at 10:45 AM

This is a wonderful Tanka about Raven!Congrats harry on your win.

James Fraser

February 19, 2011 at 7:22 AM

Many congratulations Harry on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 18, 2011 at 6:52 AM

Wow, Harry, you said a lot in just a few lines. Very provocative poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

February 18, 2011 at 5:41 AM

lovely.. my specal CONGRATS to you for the win,harry.. huggs, nette

Elaine George

February 18, 2011 at 12:39 AM

Great Tanka, Harry. Many congrat's on your big win. Lainie

Tahera Mannan

February 17, 2011 at 8:35 PM

beautiful Harry. many congratulations.

Robert Pettit

February 17, 2011 at 6:55 PM

Harry, a short one, but a very sweet one. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this little gem.

John Freeman

February 17, 2011 at 6:30 PM

Congratulations Harry on your honored place, good job. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 17, 2011 at 5:46 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, harry

Audrey Haick

February 17, 2011 at 5:18 PM

Congratulations on your fine win in the "Among the Dead" Contest, Harry.. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 17, 2011 at 5:03 PM

Congrats Harry on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy sweet success once again ..

Christine A Kysely

January 20, 2011 at 7:37 AM

Very nice...Good Luck! Christine

Diane Locksley

January 18, 2011 at 11:40 AM

I admire the brevity of your description harry. That picture has been interpreted many ways and most of the verses are very long but you did a great job in a short form. Best to you, Diane

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 18, 2011 at 5:21 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Harry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol