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Raul's Unspoken Words-Said

The important papers are all in the desk file Love again, laugh again Don't let Caleb forget me. I honestly love you Cling to Jesus, he will carry you through. Forgive me? I am so sorry... What I would want my husband to know if I died today. For Raul's unspoken word contest, thanks Raul for the Challenge!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2010 6:23:00 PM

Great poem, Doris! You give us so much to think about with your "unspoken words." The first line gave me a smile and the other lines were inspirational. And my injuries are healing well all on their own -- thanks for your prayers. Much love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/5/2010 1:57:00 PM

Beautiful,this is what i would love "My Sunshine",lOl ,to know today,Im glad i got to read this it is deep and touching indeed,,Charma:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2009 5:27:00 PM

This is wonderful, Doris. I just couldn't think what I would say for this contest. Everyone near and dear to me knows my feelings, and there is nothing with me unspoken. haha. LUv, andrea

John Freeman

Date: 12/31/2009 10:58:00 AM

I take this to be serious Doris. And a statement of your wholesome Love for your husband. God bless you and for these words of unconditional love. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 12/31/2009 8:05:00 AM

Hi Doris, I'm back again online after so many weeks. Still have to unpack some boxes, but feeling well in my new neighborhood. Had no time yet for posting poems, but will do so soon. It is good to let your husband know how you feel. Wishing you many happy years so and a happy New Year! Gert

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/31/2009 4:47:00 AM

He's a lucky Man..Wonderfully strong piece here Doris...Well done...God Bless and Happy New Year....Taz

David Byrne

Date: 12/30/2009 9:40:00 PM

I especially like the last line, very verbal, very feminine.............smile!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/30/2009 8:07:00 PM

Forgot to tell u Doris my entry is The Love Senses for my luv Ron who is not my luv at the moment... Linda-Marie.. but he is a great inspiration for my luv poetry...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/30/2009 8:00:00 PM

Good luck in Raul's contest Doris and great entry too.. blessings.. luv.. HNY 2010 .. Linda-Marie..

Joye Atkinson

Date: 12/30/2009 3:19:00 PM

Doris - Great verse! Thanks for the encouragement through your comments. I really didn't mean to post I DID IT ALL FOR YOU twice. Glad it helped. God does work in mysterious ways! God bless you as you serve Him. Love, Joye

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/30/2009 2:17:00 PM

This is lovely and truly touching, Doris. Beautiful! I wish you good luck in Raul's Unspoken Word Contest" Peace and love, Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 12/29/2009 3:30:00 PM

Beautiful piece Doris >> James

P Sheart

Date: 12/29/2009 11:20:00 AM

Doris, Deeply heartfelt, honest and real. Will make a wonderful entry in Raul's contest. Best of luck my friend! Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

Elaine George

Date: 12/29/2009 11:17:00 AM

Very touching! Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/29/2009 8:22:00 AM

These words reveal a difficult road, but an honesty that is to be admired, Doris. Whatever regrets one may have, each one of us can be forgiven, and deserve a chance to build new lives. A wonderful poem. ~Love, Carrie

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/29/2009 7:44:00 AM

Powerful feelings shown in this Doris.... Great poem, interesting how the depressive poems are the best..... Keep your head up, keep your sword swinging Doris......:JP]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2009 6:12:00 AM

Interesting write that sounds somewhat like a sucide and not natural death. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom