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Rambling, Rundown, Rapture Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France       Written 2/21/2024

 

“I love the sky as twilight falls, I love the seasons as it moves and fades, I love the rapture love that echoes through time.” Quote_by poet Rapture strings devotion binds us dearly Through joint steps together and memories. Our timeline flourished in deep happiness. Billow vagrant clouds sail with the wind's breath Wander-less towards the horizon length while we walk unconditionally transcending. Warming light consumes the fresh breathless scent Curls and lingers beneath hearts' rhythm glamour As time sweeps away as the raptured strings bind. Emerging days echo the heartbeat rhythm succulent Moments that swirl round profoundly tender Like five tiny white ray florets, loves me, loves me not.

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Date: 4/23/2024 5:43:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I love the image and quote too, Constance
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Date: 3/1/2024 9:44:00 AM
A sweet and uplifting poem. There is a softness about your words that I like Eve. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 2/28/2024 8:26:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Rapture" write again again. Have a great/fun day writing away...............
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Date: 2/27/2024 9:07:00 AM
Very romantic poem. Nice picture and quote. Congrats as winner.
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Date: 2/25/2024 9:57:00 AM
I love your second stanza, Eve dear friend, it has such depth and unfathomable meaning, rich in content and creative in style - 'While we walk unconditionally transcending'. All your verses are beautiful and an awesome quote, Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/22/2024 10:36:00 AM
You will always be loved. A serene and romantic poem. Hugs. xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/22/2024 11:10:00 AM
Thank you, you as well will always be loved. Hugs my friend
Date: 2/22/2024 8:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write with a wonderful ending/pretty picture/great quote.  "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/22/2024 11:11:00 AM
Thank you

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