Raindrops

I lov e the rain dr ops tha t land on I the win lov dows e the rain dr I ops tha lov t land on e the the dry rain dr path ops tha t land on my pain I lov e the rain dr ops tha t land on I the sea lov e the rain dr ops tha t land on my was hing t h i s i s n o t t r u e

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/6/2025 6:53:00 AM

interesting, you play with words with such ease. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/6/2025 7:06:00 AM

That's such a sweet thing to say, thank you Thriveni :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/5/2025 3:45:00 PM

Wow, I was wondering what you were talking about, now I see, tear or raindrops are fantastic shapes, a great ending line, Dilly! And now I get how an honorable mention works!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/5/2025 11:14:00 PM

It was one I did a long time ago. I think perhaps I had realised I'd left washing out, I'm not sure lol - just entered to support the contest and be part of the fun but shape poetry isn't my thing really.

Crystol Woods

Date: 3/5/2025 11:38:00 AM

Lol... love it!!! This is so good! Creative and fun! Xo

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/5/2025 12:21:00 PM

Haha thanks Crystol, this took so long that I'm always happy to bring it out again (but not sure I'll ever try another!)

Hat Bueckert

Date: 4/5/2023 7:02:00 PM

This is awesome, so clever to have multiple drops, I love the rain, this rain included, great idea

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/5/2023 11:20:00 PM

Thanks Hat, there is a lot of beauty in rain, glad you liked this. My mind created something quite impossible to design, so I'd looked at this with an underwhelmed air by the time it was done - maybe I should give this little poem a bit more credit. Glad you liked it :) and thanks for letting me know

Valsa George

Date: 4/5/2023 5:01:00 AM

Wonderful... ! You are an artist besides a great poet !

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/5/2023 5:43:00 AM

Haha thanks Valsa, I kept thinking of the idea then decided to have a play. Certainly the picture in my head was more elaborate, but I was happy with the end result :)

John Oldham

Date: 4/2/2023 7:54:00 AM

This has got to be the cleverest and coolest poem I've ever seen, DD! Awesome construction! Be well - john

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/2/2023 10:40:00 AM

Thanks John, I considered deleting this one too. I find concrete interesting but tricky. Glad you like it :)