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"Hum a tune as you walk in the rain and feel your spirit soar." (author unknown)

 

 

I sit at my desk, my mind rambling. I pause, watching the rain as it creates a beat upon the sidewalk. People pass as if in accelerated motion, fearing they’ll get wet. “How odd,” my thoughts continue rambling. “Why do we willingly step in the shower and get soaking wet but dislike fresh raindrops falling upon us? Are we afraid we’ll melt?” The rain joined my rambling with its soothing pitter patter. I opened my windows wide. “Don’t you just love the smell of fresh rain?” Raindrops float in gentle waves, wind-freed from gravity. They are the soft music from the earth, a sweet beckoning serenade. Each drop bequeaths itself unto the cooling air - wet lifeboats in a dry sea. I focus on individual raindrops noticing that each one is the same, but together they sing of treasured memories, of comforting love from those who’ve passed and of the hopes I hold for the future. I love the rain almost more than cherished photographs, for each one is a perfect moment. Each one joins millions of others, cascading from a confident sky. It is the sort of weather that washes everything anew, bringing deep puddles into which children splash. Maybe I could build a paper boat, step outside sans my umbrella, cast my boat into the gushing water along the curb, and watch it race down the street. “Wouldn’t that be fun?” I watch the raindrops collecting in our front yard and tree beds. Together the raindrops bring a richness to each hue, the browns deepen in a way that soothes my heart, bringing a steadiness to my soul. The grass glistens, reflecting the light, a new bright shine to their wands, softly waving in the breeze. Let the rain come, for I am safe, warm, and dry inside my home. Let it come with its serenade on the roof and steady drumming on the windows. From this cozy place I watch it enrich the sweet brown soils and make glossy every leaf. It is the liquid goodness that goes to the roots and refreshes the world. It is the liquid gold that inspires my creativity.
quiet afternoon drops of rain against window nature’s music heard raindrops on the roof my heart pitter-pattering memories tapping

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Date: 11/5/2023 1:01:00 PM
listening to the soft echo of rain falling gently, soothing, stirring the edges of each shadowed breath... reflections of the stillness that accompanies the starlight, the moon's glow, the excitement in the night... yes, the rain feels like peace on the heart, the promise of joy and life, the music that is nature's song blessing every life. I love this so, sweet friend. Thank you for always stirring my heart's depths, my mind's quest, my spirit's smile. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/5/2023 1:09:00 PM
your kind and mindful comments spoke to my heart, dear Gina. I'm grateful we have a 'connection...and grateful that we both stir a connection in one another. Awesome. Thank you for stopping by and for always be supportive. Have a splendid Sunday evening, Sara
Date: 10/31/2023 5:54:00 AM
Dear Sara, your Haibun is truly brilliant. The way you depict the rain is remarkable, evoking profound introspection. You possess an unparalleled talent for Haibuns, effortlessly weaving vivid descriptions throughout. I was captivated by your words from start to finish, and your haikus are equally impressive.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 8:18:00 AM
thank you, dear Sotto and poet friend. Your thoughtful remarks consistently inspire and ground me in confidence. I'm grateful that you were captivated from the start. When I truly focus on my writing, engaging the reader is one of my goals--I don't always hit the mark, though. It's a process :-) Enjoy your Tuesday, Sara
Date: 10/31/2023 5:37:00 AM
This is really deep introspection... you are the queen of Haibuns... so much description in your expression here.. i was drawn to your words from the beginning to the end.. and the haiku are great also..
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Date: 10/31/2023 8:16:00 AM
thank you for dubbing me 'Queen of Haiku.' I'll happily wear that crown :-) I do so appreciate your kind and encouraging words, grateful you were drawn into my creation. Those words mean a great deal to me. Sara
Date: 10/31/2023 2:52:00 AM
Brilliant Haibun. What a wonderful description of rain falling. Great prose. Blessings.
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Date: 10/31/2023 4:35:00 AM
thank you, Victor, for your thoughtful comments! May you have a blessed Tuesday...and thanks for your continued support, Sara
Date: 10/31/2023 2:14:00 AM
"Raindrops keep falling on my head" Lovely "haibun" Thanks for your recent visits, Sara. Much appreciated :) Hugs Charlie
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 4:34:00 AM
thanks for stopping by, Charles. I'd forgotten about that song, "Raindrops keep falling on my head." Thanks for that :-) I appreciate your visits as well. Hugs for your Tuesday, Sara
Date: 10/31/2023 1:54:00 AM
I love the rain and this haibun Sara. Thanks so much
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 4:33:00 AM
thanks for stopping by and for your comments. Grateful for you and your continued support. Have a lovely Tuesday, Sara
Date: 10/30/2023 8:16:00 PM
wonderful poem, Sara, i think as you that rain can be cozy, drops make music , your poetical work is so touching an remarkable, enjoyed your gracious poem
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 4:31:00 AM
thank you for your lovely and kind comments. I'm grateful the words touched you. Thanks for your ongoing support, Sara
Date: 10/30/2023 5:48:00 PM
Beautiful work! I also love the rain, and your haibun is magical!
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Date: 10/31/2023 4:30:00 AM
thank you, Paige, for your lovely comments. I appreciate you stopping by and am grateful for your ongoing support. Have a pleasant Tuesday, Sara
Date: 10/30/2023 2:55:00 PM
wet lifeboats in a dry sea, I really liked that, enjoyed reading your poem Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 4:30:00 AM
thanks for stopping by, Clive. I appreciate you, your kind comments, and your ongoing support. enjoy your Tuesday, Sara
Date: 10/30/2023 2:31:00 PM
Ahhh!! How alive in the rain is this poet. I enjoyed your musings while enjoying the rain and the petrichor it brings. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 10/30/2023 2:43:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Sara. I'm grateful you enjoyed my musings and the petrichor the raindrops bring. Have a pleasant evening, the 'other' sara :-)

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