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Rain ,Earth and Me

Dancing drops of the darling rain kisses the earth's terracotta face rain knows the secrets of this cute lady from the very beginning her all likes and dislikes soft touch of rain drops wake up the earth from deep sleep.... a goodmorning wish first soft monsoon rain I enjoy the smell of earth.... scent of a woman ======================== Placement:HM ;(March 2011) By:kashinath karmakar (5th March 2011) Contest:Nature,Four in One Sponsor:Constance La France

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Wilma Neels

Date: 7/18/2011 10:56:00 AM

Kash congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;-)

Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2011 10:46:00 AM

Many congrats on your WIN, Kash, with this wonderful free verse. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 9:51:00 AM

Congratulations Kashinath on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/17/2011 10:59:00 PM

a pure delight, kashi....sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/17/2011 3:57:00 PM

Congrats, Kashinath :) How cool that you related rain with women :) Enjoyed reading this :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 8:27:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., kashinath

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/17/2011 7:40:00 AM

Such an amazing piece of poetry my friend... Congrats....winning ways fo you..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/17/2011 7:35:00 AM

Congrats Kashinath on a super win with this amazing piece on rain my friend... feeling every emotion luv..

Fabiyas M V

Date: 7/17/2011 3:02:00 AM

Nice work,Kashi.Congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/17/2011 2:37:00 AM

Kash, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d

James Foulk

Date: 6/21/2011 1:52:00 PM

i'm glad i read this one, it is a most well written and beautiful Haiku, thank you for refering me to it. have a nice day.

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/29/2011 4:51:00 PM

Enjoyed this read, very romantic:) Congrats on your HM, Kashinath Thanks for your best wishes for Raccoon Went A Wooing...glad you enjoyed! Was a fun write:)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/9/2011 4:21:00 AM

Rain and Earth are my favorite too. You have sketched a beautiful scene full of aroma of first rain, which often brings in with them, the memories and the pleasing scent of a loving beauty. Beautiful write and congratulations on your win. With best wishes and love ....Ravindra...Kashinath K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 11:35:00 PM

Kash, finally getting around to THIS winners' list. Congrats on the HM. I was rereading it and thinking, the LAST one, the haiku, it is VERY much to the true haiku form. YOu did great. LUv, Andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/8/2011 6:00:00 PM

This is sensual, and lovely!! Wonderful job, Kashinath! And thanks so much for all your kind comments as always! So very appreciated :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/8/2011 12:35:00 AM

Hi Kashinath--happy to see you in Constance's list-- and thank you so much for the fave-- deeply appreciate you doing that & happy you liked it that much :) enjoy your day! :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/7/2011 7:21:00 PM

Glad you won with this sweet poem. And thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2011 1:43:00 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Constance, kashinath

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 1:36:00 PM

Hey Kash ;) congratulations on your win in the contest :) Lovely senryu

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2011 12:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's "Nature, Four In One" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 6:56:00 AM

Kash, I am presuming you won with this one, and that makes me happy too. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 6:56:00 AM

thanks for the heads up, Kash. I studied her rules but I don't recall seeing where she said about entering the first line. There are so many things we can mistake doing. That writing was totally personification and I don't know if anyone is going to understand all my metaphors! I'm feeling sad because I can't do many comments again. bye now, andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/7/2011 12:33:00 AM

This was truly an awesome write dear Kash. Warm congrats

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2011 11:07:00 PM

Congrats, love this first time round, still do. Harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 9:29:00 PM

kashi, this is amazing," scent of a woman.." whoot and cingrats for the superb win! :) huggs, nette