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Quiet Comfort Edit...Part 3

Last light fades along the mountain peak The dusk comforts a weary soul This singular day is almost gone Memory rides a carousel Tomorrow will hold its own promise The easy welcome of a new dawn For Brians contest Colours Perception Harmony

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/30/2009 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Interval" contest!
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Date: 9/30/2009 12:57:00 PM
BG, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 9:19:00 AM
What an uplifting poem. Congratulations on your third place finish in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/30/2009 7:31:00 AM
There is such a peaceful feel to this lovely poem! Congratulations on your 3 place win, Barbara!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/30/2009 6:21:00 AM
Beautiful, Dear barbara. congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 9/30/2009 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/11/2009 3:24:00 PM
Lovely images of the prarie and mountains in this lovely write, just beautiful Barbara. The Highlander would love to view these gorgeous vista's>>James
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:43:00 AM
I can feel comfort easing over me as the light fades. Thank you for this shared moment. Krista
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:39:00 AM
Such serenity in these simply lovely words. Nice one, Barbara!! Carrie
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:46:00 AM
Yes, Barb, so soothing. Love, daver
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:27:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest BG.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/10/2009 10:56:00 PM
I can feel the quiet comfort surrounding me through these two verses...excellent----(sorry for not leavin you too much comments lately,its just that im struggling to be onsite..and im glad im here today reading these jewlels by my friends)Charma
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